 Axurel 2009-09-29 . chapter 1Oh wow
I'm never sure about AUs, but this is really nice. I like it alot, your description is amazing :3 definitely love to see something longer!! haha you probably already have one.. TO THE PROOFIILEE
awesomeoneshot :D |
 Zombie Kid 2009-04-19 . chapter 1Oh my goodness, I love the ending in this one. It made me gasp aloud after giggling the whole time! It was interesting to see how this was going to turn out. My favorite part was when Cloud said, "Of course we are," because it made me kind of go, "Aw, WHOA, hey, what-oh, that's nice!"
This really made my mood, and I missed your writing alot. :) I was scrolling through your newer works and clicked on this, because it looked interesting.
Keep it up! I love your topics and plots! |
 Silent Solace 2008-12-26 . chapter 1I’d love to know who took that picture. >:D
This was a wonderful little story and has great potential. I wish it had more chapters then this, but it was made to be a one-shot so oh well. Very nice any other way. I’ll have to look into more of your stories in the future. |
 freak a geek 2008-11-29 . chapter 1Whoa...this was AWESOME! I love Cleon ^^ And this was just lovely, I can't help but favourite this now. it was fairly simple and well and very sweet. it just makes me wonder who the creeper was XD
Fabulous, I must say, overall. 8D
Love Micah |
 thevampiregyn 2008-11-12 . chapter 1I would say that you've done a good job with this fic and preferrably hope that you will post the second part to this fic up soon.
~thevampiregyn |
 I'll Be Your Lie 2008-11-09 . chapter 1loved it!!
Do you think you could make this a chapter story? Or at least make a sequal? I'm curious as to what you would make happen to Cloud and Leon's relationship and the person who took the picture if the picture gets out. |
 Lord Ringorius 2008-11-08 . chapter 1Uh-oh o_0 That might put a strain on their relationship >_>. Nice fic so far, looking foward to your next update =D |
 BelleDragon 2008-11-06 . chapter 1This was very good. You have a very fluid, engaging writing style. Though I couldn't help but cringe at the thought that they'd be caught up in a "Clinton-like" scandal by engaging intimately in the oval office and yep, that's just where they're headed with their first kiss caught on camera :/. |
 random-laughter 2008-11-06 . chapter 1I really liked this oneshot. It worked really well with their characters, and in light of the election, I thought it was a really good story. The last little conversation between the two of them was just wonderful too. Good job, and I'll definitely be adding this to my favorites! |
 Reaper1Nanashi 2008-11-05 . chapter 1So...More chapters please??
I really want to see how the picture will affect the campaign. Please and thanke ye! |
 Mr. Shishio 2008-11-05 . chapter 1So maybe I'm sadistic, but I'm kind-of really curious to see the aftermath of that picture... |
 Oblea 2008-11-05 . chapter 1Lol, I'm on a roll with these reviews, aren't I? Cloud as a cross dressing politician made me lol, firstly. But, asides from that, I like this. You did a relatively short piece, but you're still able to show three dimensional characters and a good piece of plot in this small writing. I like short things like this. :3 The ending still made me sad, in a way... |
 Aindel S. Druida 2008-11-04 . chapter 1Oh, but now I want to know who -took- the picture!
It's amazing, how something fairly short like this can have so much character and so much to say, but you've managed somehow. There's so much life here, and so much is said about the characters without being Brechtian about it.
Aindel |
 XxTypoMasterxX 2008-11-04 . chapter 1YAY! I loved it! Thank you for writing this! I just loved how it was all written out, the end scene was very nice and heart warming ^_^ |