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NorthernLights25
2009-11-27 . chapter 5
Please update soon!
Orion Lineus Black
2009-09-10 . chapter 5
I am completely intrigued by your concept and while I'm not sure if its the only one of it's kind, you've inspired me to write fanfiction of my own once again. I like your premise and I think you should seriously consider it. You've got the makings of a great fic and it has a lot of potential so long as you don't mess it up. My one piece criticism to you is to keep it fresh and original. I'd advise against making Harry a 'super-harry' type since that isn't plausible. He's already experienced his version of the future, so he's certainly gained experience from it but to keep it plausible. How he feels for Hermione should be kept as natural as it has been, don't rush their relationship, but don't back pedal either.
Cassandra30
2009-07-18 . chapter 5
Good story! I am looking forward to being able to read more of this someday soon.
Cassandra30
2009-07-18 . chapter 4
Yes! Now Sirius knows, Kreacher is happier and sweetness abounds.
Cassandra30
2009-07-18 . chapter 3
Inferi and the Locket!
Cassandra30
2009-07-18 . chapter 2
Excellent!!
Cassandra30
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
What a wonderful idea for an AU story. How about did some also wish him in to the coma trying to protect him?
jupimako
2009-05-13 . chapter 5
this fic is really really good so far! i can't wait to read more XD.
Ceralyn
2009-04-24 . chapter 5
Woo-hoo! This is so exciting! I appreciate how you have Hermione being cautious about his "vision." It stays in character.

Cruel cliff hanger at the end there! I have to say Ron has never been one of my favorite characters, especially during PoA, GoF, and especially DH. However, I've enjoyed what you've written of him so far. He's not a bad person and would be worried about his friend, but his temper and grudge-holding ability are still rather obcene. And I enjoy scenes where he gets jealous when Harry and Hermione get together - he deserves it since he's always sucha jerk to her. Lol.

Really like where this is going so far. Especially how he didn't go back in time to his younger body like they usually have happen, but rather have a "vision." Very nice premise.

Look forward to reading more!! :)
Albaholly
2009-03-30 . chapter 5
Good Story. Hope you update.
Princess Silverstar
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
Ah...! The reversed role of the sleeping beauty! haha
Lord Lugos
2009-03-01 . chapter 5
So Ron's starting up as a prat again? Bloody hell. Come on, don't leave us hanging, MORE.
Lord Lugos
2009-03-01 . chapter 2
Wow! I like it so far. Kinda like my unveiling story. So many possibilities with fanfiction, aren't there? I thought about a snape that dreams the future, perhaps every character dreams the future, but I never thought of Harry himself dreaming the future. A neater twist than a typical back in time, dreaming that is. God I love this stuff. Gonna go read the rest, now. I hope you update soon.
ILikeComps
2009-02-28 . chapter 5
Good story thus far. I like that Harry woke with the future in him memory. Thanks for sharing.
Lord Marix
2009-02-25 . chapter 5
It is good so far better then average and as always a good start although the seeming dead bit is a little disappointing. Please continue. Oh yes Poke, hehe.
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