That ending was the best thing in here! xD
But .. but .. but I don't feel it fulfilled ;_
You're mean T.T

Okay, oh my gosh. This chapter was SO FREAKING POWERFUL! I felt my chest contracting as I read this, no lie. This is incredible, I haven't read something this good that's not a published book EVER! I'm loving the story so far, just eating it up. Beautiful work.

My chest contracted again here...not to mention I cried incessantly. Powerful. Fantastic.

My chest contracted again here...not to mention I cried incessantly. Powerful. Fantastic.

Leo's anger made me happy here. I have never loved him so much as I just did moments ago. Richards is a crazy -. Great job, this chapter was oddly intense.

Okay, oh my gosh. This chapter was SO FREAKING POWERFUL! I felt my chest contracting as I read this, no lie. This is incredible, I haven't read something this good that's not a published book EVER! I'm loving the story so far, just eating it up. Beautiful work.

Oh my god, such an amazing story! You are good writer, keep going on (especially Raph fics). Liked it! :D

I loved this story so much. All the detail, everything. Great job.

Love how you wrote Raphael. Definatly sounds just like him and his anger. Awesome job.

I think you wrote the characters to a "T", I love this and it is only the first chapter, Awsome job and I'll continue on my way to chapter 2 now.

shame on them! i know what despair can do to someone, but damnit, if nothing else, the least you can do if have hope for a loved one when you don't know for sure they're gone.

...Well, I'll make it simple, and to the point and say that this was one of the best stories I have read in this section. I loved this story, and was rather ticked off at the fact that I had to go to school and wouldn't be able to read it. I wasn't able to properly focus on it either so I blame your horribly compelling story if I wind up getting in trouble. As it is though, I could care less. Wonderful job.

superb ending to a suspencefull fic well done *applauds* nice. A tad cliche and predictable at the very end there but cute i like how it played out. very nice.

omg, i can't beleive im this far and haven't even comented yet. anyway this is really good and i can't wait to read more. l8r!

And this is what I would call believable. Nothing settled and everyone trying to deal. Nicely done, and will continue to watch out for you.