Update soon please! I'm begging you!

quicker updates, plz?

Interesting so far. Really interesting.

Okay, I just trucked through all nine of your chapters and can't wait for more. You have really captured all the characters so well. I know you just posted this last chapter only a week ago, but I hope inspiration and the urge to write strikes you soon. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for all your hard work.

So, I'm sure you've gained the confidence to continue your story, but I just wanted to add that you have very quickly drawn me in. I also appreciate your correct grammer and spelling.

It's been awhile. It's strange but you always seem to be one step a head of me. Whenever I finally sit down to write/post I see that you've already done it. I find it mildly entertaining and wonder if the pattern will continue.
As for the review, you know my opinions of your writing abilities. I saw nothing really this time to note, but it's also been a while since I last reviewed. What is it that you claim to be cheating on?
I will admit you had me rather thrown off with the beginning. I thought the brooch was perhaps her becoming a green rider, of course the black spot on the man's head obviously implied otherwise.
Aside from that, I hope you're doing well and have a happy 4th of July.

yay! you finally updated. and it weas a very good update. update again really soon.

This is a really good story so far, I can't wait to see what happens.

LOVED IT, CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE

a this one is a cliffhanger too! Please update soon!

that...was a FLIPPING AWESOME author's note. I think I liked it more than the chapter! No jk your writing is excellent and amazing :) Please continue !

Wow you're getting really good at all these cliffhanger things. I say you need to stop this at once. It's just plain me. Nice chapter, it's a little shorter than the last but it was a great intro to whatever is going on so job well done.

Hello.

Let's see, um the sentence "There he lingered as a vague half-a-plan--he could hardly do more,..." That sentence just took me a bit to understand. I had to go back and reread it.

Where 'Zachary nodded slightly acknowledgment, giving no indication he noticed.' should be just slight or slightly acknowledging.

"he would like the truth of why Estora had meeting with him even less." had meeting should be had been meeting or was meeting.

Finally the part where "His mind having wandered far a field, he stared..." what does that mean? I'm very confused by it.

Other than that good stuff, I look forward to see who caused the bombing. And that was so cute when Zachary put his name down anyways!

Yay! More Green Rider makes a happy Froggie! :D

Good job--I loved how Zachary called her Kari. That may seem like a little thing, but it's so sweet. And how he signed it Zachary...:D

Hmm, interesting developments as to the Coutre marriage alliance...I hope that this may speed up a Zacharigan one...:D

Great job! Update soon!

update soon. please.