This was a truely wonderful story. I'm glad that you gave into the niggle to write it because its great. The plot was tight and the emotion took me on a roller coaster ride. It was also a pleasure to find only minor grammer or spelling mistakes. One thing did bug me though: after she was hit you made no mention of bruising. She would have had a hell of a time trying to cover up the bruise and there would have been considerable pain yet you seemed to forget about it after it happened. Anyway, I adored the ending. It left me wanting more, yet sighing at the perfection of it. Great story.

oh my, this was a absolutely beautiful fic, and i seriously loved it a lot. thank you for writing this (rather long, yet short) piece.

I liked it but I wish the ending had a bit more. Did Darien know about her accident from years ago? Are the other wolves at the school too? Couldn't he have sent her an anonymous card or something over the years?

aww... what a sweet ending! >.< nice story. short and sweet! Thanks!

very very nice! :) altho i do wish that serena and darien got together earlier and not have to wait 5 years, i have the admit that their ending was just perfect for them :)

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it!! OMG you have serious skills! usually i don't like fanfics that change the whole setting of the stories but this is one brilliant exception!!
good job and good luck!
i'll definitely be checking out your other work!! =D

It's the most beautiful story and you managed to accomplish it in just five chapters. I really hope that you'll continue your gift.

great story! i like it! ;)

omg! that was so good!! if only it was longer...it would be such much better :D

This was a really good story I loved buji and Darien! They were so cute

i liked it but i was just wondering why do you always have Serena hurt?

BEAUTIFUL

GREAT

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING AND SHARING THIS WONDERFUL STORY

the characters aren't the ones i'm used to. I can't really decide whether I like Serena or not. She's a little bubble-headed and less perfectly-kind than she is most of the time. It makes her overall less likeable. Almost as if her schoolmates have good reason for not liking her.

just quickly wanted to let you know that I was REALLY excited when Asanuma and Buji showed up.
I think this is a lot like STC, minus Luna, minus Sammy, and if Lita and Darien were given a bit less money from the government. Everything else is close. Those changes could cause a ripple effect throughout your timeline, making the characters in Leather and Lockets.

Oh this story was just fabulous.
I cried when they split and she got into the accident.
I wish i could have seen darien fuss over and be guilty over her leg and cane. But it was still good.
Nice ending too.
=)