I thought this was a really creative twist. I liked it. Thanks for your hard work!

I wonder if you are still looking at reviews for this story, hope so. I just finished reading this story and I have to say, I love it! Your imagination and writing skill to describe how Edward might react to becoming human is very realistic. Your description of how he might act and respond is priceless. My most favorite part is his "I want it all" speech. That was heartwrenchig and perfect. I also really, really liked how you had Bella fight for him to stay and not leave her. That to me was what I would have expected from Bella that didn't happen and should have in New Moon. And I loved how you got him to realize how soulful he and his family truly are. I think you stayed true to the characters and I just absolutely loved it. Thanks

Yay! A million <3s! Muah!

and then he bursts through the glass and bites her before anyone can react! + three days and we have a happy ending? yes? yes? or not...

what? I'm not invested in the story, at al...

I am reading this story for this first time, and I ususally don't review until the end, but I just wanted to say now what a great, great story this is so far. One of the most orginal plots I have read and so emotional and well written. I was so deeply into this chapter that I actually cried, something I haven't done while reading a story in a long time. So, awesome job so far, I am offto finish the rest of the story...

All I'm saying, is he better not leave, all new-moon-style, cuz that shit's coming out tomorrow, and I'm already too emotional (YAY! NEW MOON'S COMING OUT TOMORROW!) to be able to handle that. So, be good, jandco.

Woa. Ok, what the f is up with the timeline? Hadn't it only been 10 hours? A quick transformation for Eddie. And it looks like the villain's monologue claims another victim. Sorry, Victoria.

Hmm. Ok... Jandco? I mean, I love you and I love this story. But. I kinda hate you too a little bit right now. What the hell? Why did you do that? I'm actually crying here. Hello emotional rollercoaster story, nice to meet you.
I'm heart-broken, but at the same time, I'm all "get a semen sample, for goodness sake!" We wouldn't want jandco to pull a Stephenie to get babies out of these two ;)
Will they meet up with the Volturi, put their speculation to rest about him being human again, and then will Edward bite Bella again? That would be vicious-circle fun.
What about Rosalie? Will she find a/her singer? Will Emmett find (another) one?
Edward doesn't survive this third conversion, does he? The next ten chapters are just Bella's drawn-out suicidal plans, yes?

Jeez, you're making me all paranoid and shit.

Lately, it's been taking a lot for me to stick with a story. (There are MAJOR exceptions...) but, when starting new stories...once E/B get together, it loses it's luster...
Anyway, I tell you this b/c I NEVER lost interest in this beautiful story!
I do love Breaking Dawn, but I have no problem with an alternate ending and this Bella Fought tooth and nail, never accepting Edward's decision's to just keep her human.
My only MAJOR problem w/ the books was Bella's acceptance of Edward leaving in New Moon. I understand the choice b/c of how she viewed herself in relation to Edward. Why would he ever choose her so why wouldn't he go? It's his choice. THAT. however, is NOT me. I would have looked for him. Even if it was to prove that he didn't get to act like he never existed. Your Bella, fought like that! She knew what she wanted and what was right. It was great!
Plus! Edward- playing baseball was just too cool! smile.
Thanks!

Awesome story. And I agree with all you mentioned in your AN! And Edward finally got it! And I'm happy for Rose and Emmet too! Sigh. Excellent work!

The vows were incredibly sweet. I hate that he doesn't remember any of his first time.

i love your version! very cool and original!

Absolutely freaking loved it!!

After reading MANY Twilight fics yours has definitely surpassed every expectation and is easily my favorite! Thank you for keeping such a beloved story alive. Yours was so seamlessly intertwined with the heart of the first book and gives a much needed "antidote" to our thirst for all things Twilight.

This story was an amazingly well planned and well written work. The new take added more to each character. I loved it.