^_^ So sweet... a nice ending. :D And a very well written story! I'm sorry it was so short... I hope there's a sequel. :)

O.O Must... read... on... to... find.. out.. what... happens! :O THIS IS SO EXCITING! :D

Oh! Mystery robot. You might have a ways to go in improving your stories language and descriptions, but do not worry about it. Practice makes perfect. This story still has many good qualities!

Wahh! *Sniffle* WAH!! Omega has met his omega... After all, Omega is Greek and reffered to as the end.

You did a nice job with this story. The last chapter seemed somewhat like the stereotypical "find the victim, bring him back to his girlfriend, happy ending for everyone" but it's not too bad. I'm not sure if the ending invites a sequel, but that's not a problem. See you next time.

Nice chapter here. This first chapter has this faint aura of fear, and it is a good introduction. Perhaps your story can be improved with more descriptions. It is hard to describe something too well! ^_^

Whoa. Tails must be going through the worst crisis of his life right now. I hope he gets better.
You didn't describe the robot that Tails was trapped inside of. You said it was E-Series, but provided no other details that would allow comparison or contrast to other, better-known E-Series robots such as E-102 Gamma.
Otherwise, nice work on Chapters 10 and 11. Keep it up, and see you next chapter.

Good story so far! Continue