That was cute-ish kinda sad-ish though...

Awesome! Update soon plz!

Please update this

WOW

I'm very intrigued by this story so far. I wish to see where it goes, even though I know it's bound to be a sad ending. It's the journey that matters. And then there's the story behind this (what Yuki's sick with, how they know, how long it's been, etc.) that all needs to be covered.

I didn't really notice any OOC-ness, but that may be just me.

Update... please? I look forward to it!

So good and awesome I cant wait for more.

Nonsense, that was a wonderful introduction! I look forward to your next post.

~Magenta

Thats so sad :'(
Please update soon
Thanks

Poor Yuki! Update soon please!

Great start.
I look forward too more soon.
BYe

Like it so far!

-Ray

I feel so bad for all of them! Please update soon!