 Lisa 2009-12-19 . chapter 1 I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this series! I loved how you stayed true to the Saga. Quite frankly I can't believe more people haven't reviewed your fanfic because it truly is incredible. |
 The Racey RENThead 2009-07-02 . chapter 14I loved your story. Great writing. |
 l 2009-06-26 . chapter 3 i like your story |
 Twilight-Muse-76 2009-05-28 . chapter 3I believe it is perfect for Renesmee to have child like qualities. Just because her body grows fast does not mean her mind & emotions have to always match, although they will to an extent.
The story is great. I truly enjoy it. I like the longer stories better that draw you in & keep your attention.
This is one of the better ones I have read. Awesum!
I hope u write more in the future :) |
 PenName76 2009-03-30 . chapter 14I really enjoyed this story. It was very creative and a really insightful look into Nessie's life and her frustrations. Well done. |
 GiannaCullen 2009-03-28 . chapter 14 so r u starting the sequal right now at this point?lol im relly enjoying thee story btw lol. |
 o0Beela0o 2009-03-28 . chapter 14love it |
 neener.will.quit 2009-03-28 . chapter 14aw. this was a very nice ending. i normally don't read stories with this plot, but your story has been an exception. great job. keep up the wonderful writing! |
 A is for Angel 2009-03-28 . chapter 14cant wait for more:) |
 bella c'ella luna 2009-03-28 . chapter 14hi evie
i just wanted to let you know that i enjoyed different a lot. i fell behind in reading it (ugh i'm so far behind on everything!) but was very happy today when i got caught up.
i'm eager for the sequel! great job :)
luna |
 Maddy 2009-03-27 . chapter 14 ooh my heart is beraking for all of them.. especially Edward... I understand Bella's point of not coddling her.. but really.. her daughter just went through a traumatic experience... in NO circumstance would I just force her to go through things alone. It could be a gradual change, but that's just me... Her way of thinking sounds like a cold parent who justifies their "tough love" |
 Rebecca 2009-03-26 . chapter 13 Hey, my name's Bec. I've read your whole story and absolutely loved it. I've read a few others, but this was definately my favourite. I'd be happy to help with editing too, if that would help you get more chapters up faster. I know it takes a while to write the chapters and you want everything to flow, but I seriously CAN'T wait for the next chapter to be posted!
Let me know if you want some help with the editing or anything else.
Bec.
xo |
 Petuniac3 2009-03-16 . chapter 4I just love it |
 Noble Korhedron 2009-03-15 . chapter 13B for this Ch. It wasn't as interesting as some of the others but still good. Keep it up. |
 Maddy 2009-03-11 . chapter 13 yay.. update!! aww.. that last part was so sweet
Jacob says it’s cold and like a stone, but I think it’s just right, because when I feel sad or confused his hands holding me are the best things.- that's just the sweetest line ever x)
I can see Nessie changing and becoming less of a brat here...
“Noo, I need you to hear me,” My heart hurt and Momma hugged me and Daddy.- poor Edward.. this must be killing him.. and poor Nessie... I didn't realize how much she depended on this bond. :( |