I didn't know this had been updated. It seemed a little short and was all in bold (I don't know if that was intentional) but the end with Suu was interesting. I hope you update again soon.

Those pairings seem alright to me. Actually, I was suspecting a Naru/Mitsune when I first started reading this. This was early in the story, before things had developped the way they have.

Man what a chapter, keep it up

Loving this chapter as well. Would have found it slightly untrue to his character if Keitaro was able to just kill them and be fine with it. Haruka condoning it was a very good touch. Seems like Keitaro's options are slowly closing up, but Mutsumi's still one and I was always a fan of that pairing. Keep up the good work.

Expect Lemons? so there are lemon trees in the forest. lol

looking good, keep writing.

and if the votes are still open.

vote for Mutsumi/Naru/Keitaro.
Motoko/Kitsune is fine too.

Man I would have done the same thing, what changes occur between the girls and Ketaro, definatly helped move things along, keep up the good work

Hey.
Im still keepin up and lovin it...
i must admit you've inspired me to keep writing my fanfic after a small dry season of writing...
but still... loving your work so much.
Keep it up :D

Keitaro's kinda getting the shaft here. I mean, the girl he loves...he discovers is a lesbian. One of the girls that loves him is slowly becoming a lesbian/bisexual. That leaves Su, Shinobu and Kanako, which I'm pretty sure he won't turn to because he loves them as sisters. So, what's left for the K-man...maybe Mutsumi...but I don't know if she's bi or a lesbian in the story.

This review response is for CAP:

First, this is sometime after book three. Motoko has not yet shown any major signs of having (and coming close to admitting) any feelings for Keitaro.

If your referr to my use of Keitaro as the one she thought about in the springs, the answer is simple: hes the only guy around she tolerates.

I am thinking of an ideal for the Yrui scene,.. Im thinking more of something along the lines of Naru smelling a wild flower that is.. shall we say, arousing :D

Interesting chapter.

One thing - to keep this realistic from now on, for the sake of his sanity, Keitaro is going to have to have some serious talks - probably with Haruka - to come to terms with what he had just done. For someone as kind and gentle as Keitaro to suddenly kill three people, and show no real emotional after-effects of doing so, would be totally OOC.

This is not something to be just brushed off, and everything returns to normal the next day. In fact, if he gets any sleep at all that night, he is probably going to be totally freaked out the next morning.

And I guarantee that Kitsune is going to be taking some self-defense lessons from Motoko from now on, too.

But I'm sure that you have all of this under control, so next chapter please!

Oh, yeah. Marx810 is right. Motoko's top is a Kimono and the bottom is a Hakama.

What keitaro did is what i wish to do to the sick fu(ks of this earth who do something as purely evil as rape. i have seen the result of rape on my ex. i would kill. none of them deserve to live. good chapter

Well damn. Wasn't expecting that. Very intense, though I'm assuming that's what you're going for. I was a bit surprised that no one tried to stop Keitaro. At least for the legal ramifications. Would have expected him to beat them into full body casts or something but not go all the way. But considering it was to make everyone feel differently about him, I'd say you definitely succeeded.

Oh and I believe Motoko's top is a Kimono and the bottom's a Hakama. Could be wrong.

Not really sure what you are trying to do here. Motoko not that long ago was haveing feelings for Keitaro, and now she is with Kitsune? I can understand if they were together now because they both love one another and the love Keitaro as well, but if not then you really are going to need to show more of Motoko losing the feeling for Keitaro and them moving on to Kitsune(Same with her as well). Really hope this does not turn in to the "all Bi Hinata Inn".

If you are going to do a yuri scene with Naru and Kanako, it better have a good background to it, remember Kanako loves Keitaro, really don't see her sleeping with someone esle, be it male or female.

Its a good story, just don't fill it up with pointless yuri if it has no background in the story.

Oh. My. Haruhi-sama.

I would have expected Motoko to go after the SOBs--and it looks like she was going to--but this works surprisingly well.

I wonder if there will be any legal consequences.

I want to make it perfectly understood this was not what I planned for the chapter. I had to look at it twice before i decided to keep it.