 sophia666 2009-03-07 . chapter 1#10 cracked me up. :) Great writing. |
 ChristinaAngel 2009-01-12 . chapter 1This was sweet, I liked the reoccuring themes of perfection and red wine, I did think it was strange that Tenten drank wine when she was pregnant but I liked how both you and Neji got around that, that was funny. |
 Kannika 2008-12-30 . chapter 1That was awesome. I liked the last part especially, with the cranberry juice. That's so Neji. It was simple, but amazing. You're incredible. Nejiten forever! |
 paper parasols 2008-11-23 . chapter 1Yes, Neji, TenTen is perfection for you. =D Incredible story, I loved it a lot. Only complaint was that I wished it was longer, but everybody wants that. Favorite! |
 Tanya Lilac 2008-11-12 . chapter 1Their dynamic is just unbelievable. I love your work - have I ever told you that? |
 Xanie 2008-11-09 . chapter 1The last line cracked me up! Holy hell! |
 dreaming.sapphire 2008-11-08 . chapter 1Loll. I feel so slow. It took me a while to figure out he was serving her cranberry juice. XDD It's sad that Tenten can't tell though... Even if cranberry juice has that bitter taste to it like wine (in a way). And bad Tenten!! Lol. Good work, it was adorable! =] |
 beckylovesgigs 2008-11-08 . chapter 1lol i like it |
 JoiZ. D 2008-11-08 . chapter 1Hey there, sorry for the late review, I was really busy with my finals. But now that it's over... XD
Anyways, cranberry juice! OMIGOSH! I've been tricked too! Well, no wonder it's so addicting to Tenten, imagine if she really took alcohol during her pregnancy! Neji you smart guy! XD
I really love your stories, they're awesome!! Keep it up! |
 Gemina 2008-11-06 . chapter 1So cute! I love the way he watches out for her and the baby! |
 Katako-Chan 2008-11-05 . chapter 1LOL, I love it! ♥ |
 .Poisoned Scarlet. 2008-11-05 . chapter 1LOLOLOL! That was funny. Tenten doesnt know how wine tastes or something?
:3
Panda-chan |
 Merciless Ruby 2008-11-05 . chapter 1nice one shot! I love this! |
 rallybabe89 2008-11-05 . chapter 1so tenten is like 5 months preggers and still hasn't told neji about the kid...but wants red wine. i'm slightly confused. |
 Tracer 2008-11-05 . chapter 1 If she's pregnant, drinking any kind of alcohol at all could lead to REALLY BAD THINGS for the baby. |