We're sorry for not reading/reviewing until now, but with this catagory's track record, we've been convinced that no one else would write here again. And the jist of the people now is El Gringo, you, and I.

Sorry for rambling.

This story was superb; I can't put it to words. I do hope you write more; you have a talent for writing.

Until next time,

Mantineus

An interesting story that, while marked as complete. I wouldn't mind seeing expanded a bit. Thank you for sharing it with us.