Loved it! Though i do wish it had been longer :) I like a possessive Jareth though & the way you wrote this piece was just beautiful. Well done!

I LOVE THIS CONCEPT! I think you should make a full length story based around it!

Is this supposed to be from Jareth's point of view? I'm only slightly confused on that part and also, does Sarah fade every morning or what? I realize that I don't know the song and that I would probably have to listen to it to understand, but I'm still confused. I liked it but confused.

Nicely done Rhia! You should do more like this! ~SA~

Interesting, and cool chapter. Thank you for sharing it. Keep smiling. :-)