Ha-ha! Great idea! I'd never thought about why Napolean hated Tina or why he didn't have a mom. If my friend ever wonders that, this is the story I'll tell her. Thanks! ;D

lol love it

That was hilarious!

Lol. That was funny.

Tina ate Napoleon's mom? No wonder she's a fat lard!

LMAO! omigod, i love this story!

This IS gay- y.

P.S. i'm from where they filmed it and napolean or NEPOLEAN for you. and he is stupid and so is my cousin who is in the movie in the crowd and he is stupid too.

The Hell? That was one of the worst stories I've ever read.

'OH NOS!'? What the heck is that about. No good writer puts that in a story they actually plan on publishing.

that was great. but how come you have it under k?

Haha, I like it. I wondered why he didnt like the llama

i loved it keep it up. I heart napoleon Dynamite

Ahaha! I loved it! I think you portrayed Napoleon perfectly!

Mynn Demetri

hm... needs a tad bit more work.. describtion maybe. other then that it was good (:

This is written so much like a script that I might use it for a movie. Lol. But good job.

LOL I always wondered what happened to Napoleons mom..