great story

Max's POV is great. It is so fun to read that she's going through the same realization that he is. It would be fun to read more of this if you ever decide to make it longer (hint, hint;P

That was really cute how you took us through his thoughts to his realization. Really enjoyed the direction of his thoughts as well.)

i liked it. more please?

You are a really good writer! You so have to write more...please?

awesome POV. i luved it:)

nice this is really good your a fab writer keep it up

Nice, very nice. I loved that scene, Max's face was like:twirls hair: priceless! :laugh: But does she really believe in Karma?

Wow, those chapters were far apart. I liked how you had them telling the story I liked this alot it was good

I liked it! You should write more!

I eally like this story and i hope you write more like it from this time period.

It's good too (like the Alec POV). Nice to have them both.

cool. please continue

Cool, Max's POV. Good. I personally think Renfro chose Alec for Max, being that looks just like Ben, because she *wanted* to disturb her. I'm guessing she knew how Max thinks about her "brothers and sisters", and though pairing her with someone who looked like a brother she'd had to kill would be a way of breaking her spirit.

love it. you should write more maybe an AU

but then again...

love rosie.