a charming, and worthy read.
this was a nice pick-me-up after a stressful day, for sure. :)

Ok, the writing was good and held hardly any mistakes. Your take on the relationship between Axel and Roxas was odd... And the friendship between the characters including their daily activities were definitely based on your own experiences.

All in all, it wasn't exactly my cup of tea, but you can certainly write. You write all the ideas out clearly enough holding fast to the essentials in every character's personality so as not to loose touch with familiarity in their behavior. So yeah, well done.

Maybe try writing another fic without and drugs and perhaps a little less swearing.

Did like it though.

Taa taa

Over n' out

Creep

LOL elbowing someone repeatedly without noticing it x'D LOL that's like Asking a question you wanted to ask before you wanted to do it! rofl
Ahahahaha I can imagine the creepy lighting of the fire on Sora's face in the dark while grinning like a freak *cackles*
You want to maarry him~ ... ugh. fuhcking prop 8. DAMMIT.
nonono, Roxas! you gotta ask him yourself or you won't be able that brief moment of suffering as you go through his routine introduction XD
Huh? What's so slutty about rolling paper?? *naive to the druggie world*
hahahahaha but what if the "something" Axel "reeaally needed" is Roxas? X'D
*looks at the scroll bar* OAO NO! I'M THREE QUARTERS DONE?! TTATT
Fuhck...I'm in the same situation as Roxas..only I'm afraid to say my feelings.. damn you Roxas! You're lucky! You got your crush your crush and you never even had to tell him how crazy you were about him! DX *strangles Roxas* UNGRATEFUL

Aww that was really cute~!
When Axel said that thing about Roxas hating him so much that the sight of him made him want to kill himself, my heart hurt! X_@
Although I was a little disappointed that you never told us what happened the first time they met... you made out to seem like it was some big thing by the way Roxas was avoiding the question and Axel kept asking... I was kinda looking forward to it..
The Roxas and Namine fight scene was pretty epic though.

I loved it. I thought it was so cute the way you, played the cute love sceen in the house where they first kissed. I just loved it. I hope you make more... lol and btw my first review after I had to re new my account lol.
Hopefully hear from you ^.^

Hmm. What to say? It's a somewhat lighter toned story as compared to some of your others. It's not bad though. I like how you associated characters with one another and Roxas' development. And yes the ending does feel somewhat quick, but it's not bad. But did Roxas have an attitude. >.< Either way, I liked this story although I was a bit disconcerted by the somewhat prevalent typos.

This is really good. :D
well done.

Amazing'rific story, I loved it!

is this a multi chap? i honestly cant tell, cause it says its finished at the top, but you say theres a second chapter...?

OMG... that was such a delicious read! :3
Truly it was! Just the whole theme in general was witty and I ADORED the bit in the alley! Squee-tastic! Amazing work you've done! Great job!

Holy schnitzle that was Epic mmf amazing! x3 tptally uber awesome, no lies! (its seriously the msot decent read I've had in a while... Wow.. thats shocking; cus I read.. a lot... like.. a LOT a lot... like a really really really lot... so like.. -_-' you get the point! Fank yews for writing it, cus its an absutivilitasmic win! x3 (dudes, this frilly personality of mine is scaring me.. ._. xD oh well) Anywho~ omfg 2 thousand stars! Byes~