 Fortune Hunter 2009-01-07 . chapter 1Thanks for the revision.
As for the story itself, it was actually good since the Centurions rarely get enough time to have a relaxing walk in cannon. Even rarer to get their deserved thank you from the people they protect.
Maybe I'll make a one shot in this category as well. Just not in the immediate future since I have to re-watch all the episodes to get them in character so to speak.
There is one little mistake I'll have to point out - "what's a husky?"
The W should be capitalized but this one's relatively minor. A well rounded critique is always suggested by ffnet anyway thus I added that little nitpick.
I'm sorry that I cannot review your anime stories since I have trouble following Gundum 00's story line nor have I even watched Code Geass.
Still I wish you good luck in your stories. |