My reaction to the second to last paragragh. oh holy shit its L!

Gawd, I'm retarded. I had to read the comments to understand the story! XD But after reading the story again, one word: Brilliance.

absolutely wonderful!

the ending is so perfect, I'm speechless!

Gosh I love this. It's so sad and yet so GOOD.

It creeps me out how Mikami is totally okay with this... Even if he is obeying his "god".

And how Light is seriously making Mikami a recreation of L.. He made the cookies and EVERYTHING?

Why Light...why...

Very haunting...

One of the best oneshots I've read so far. I especially like the touch with the time. 11:05? Clever.

I don't think this belongs in the horror genre. It's too sad, more like a tragedy. But it's still really good.

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Well that was, uh, creepy. Yet oddly intriguing...

I liked it. Haunting. And seems to suggest...? Light trying to recreate L? Have I got that completely wrong?

Either way, amazing :D

Kate

Hah! Finally a good reason for Light to use Teru! He likes pretending he's L! X3

I enjoyed the way you didn't come right out and say, Light pretends Teru is L. It gave a little more depth to the story :D Still it's interesting to see Teru's thoughts on the way Light was treating him, he had no clue what it meant since he never met L.

But still when we look at Light it shows how much L's death screwed him up. He's willing to use his own followers to give himself L's ghost who's willing to obey him. It's probably some sick fantasy come to life for him.

All in all I loved your story! The psychological ones that make you think are always the best, and so is horror XD

God, I love the tone of this piece. It's like a quiltwork of thoughts and motions and jagged edges converging on the head of pin.

Uh, lame, sorry. But you should understand that I like it.

Oh Light, you poor arrogant child why you murdered L? How could you be a God if you can’t bring back to life someone you are missing so desperately?

Utterly chilling. *shivers*

LOVE. And I don't even like Mikami. :) You just write him so well, though... no creepy stalkerness here, no 'OHMAIGODITSGODHAIIIIIIIIIIII'. Thanks. :)

aww that was so sad, it loved it