**hysterical laugh** You know, keeping us hanging isn't very nice, is it? No. It's not. But, then again, I know how much of a mega ** it is to keep your readers happy with continuous updates. So, I'll just have to remain insane until then. Okay? Okay.
**curls in ball in corner while sucking thumb and rocking back and forth**

-birobird
xox

Haha. What I loved about this chapter, is you actually gave them a space heater! Instead of the vile substitute a.k.a Jacob. Yeah, yeah, he's sweet and caring n all, but jees, against Edward? The boy's got nothing, he's so much more like a child. Anyway enough rambling, great work on this chapter. You have everything so...excellently done. I just...I obviously can't criticise it one bit because, well, you sound like a ** genius.

Therefore, I bow down to you. And now I'm really upset and more depressed and angsty than Bella in New Moon because I just realised something heart breaking! There's only ONE CHAPTER LEFT! ONE!
Oh, god...

-birobird
xox

**heavy breathing** OMG, I'm like, friggen tearing up here. You got me on the edge of my damn seat with this **! God, I didn't review before on the chapter with the music box, so I have to talk about it now. AND oh my jeebus, how sweet was that? I almost crapped my dacks with happiness. Such and Edward thing to do isn't it? CRAP! AND Victoria being the Edward's sire? Holy guacamole, did not see that one coming! You sure know how to make someone obsessed don't ya? Wow. Anyway, onward!

-birobird
xox

cant wait for your next chapter!

Love it! Update ASAP!
Please and thank you!!

I must say this fanfic is different from all the others.
I mean come on, you don't always see Edward this way, hahahaha=)

this is a very entertaining fanfic and I'm very happy that I found this. I'm not even halfway done but I decided to make an early review since you deserve it. I love how you wrote all of this and I'm loving it more that it has it's own unique characteristics.

And I'm loving it even more that I still have a lot to read, til then and continue with your work. I must admit, if this was the kind of edward that was in the books of the twilight saga, it might actually sell more. Hahahaha.

Good chapter! Love your twist on this story!

Loved this chapter! Glad James is dead and gone. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Haha. Four hour erections. LOL. You know, for such someone who prides himself on being so intelligent with decades of experience and whatnot under his belt, Edward can be quite the dense retard. Obviously, he can't even distinguish between contentment and love. Haha. It almost makes him look inferior. Silly, naive little Edward. *shakes head* AND, he's such a hypocrite. He said humans were strange for changing their foods to make them more aesthetically pleasing. I'm pretty sure, he wouldn't want to be feeding off of a fat lady or anything.
Haha. This is such an amazing story, and as you have seen ^ I'm getting way too involved with the character's that I'm commenting on their opinions of chicken wraps. Anyways, off to the next chapter!

-birobird
xo

I’ve posted this review before but I wasn’t logged in at the time; and I think something funky happened technology-wise because I couldn’t find whether or not it was actually submitted when I checked later, so I’m resubmitting in the hopes that you’ll actually get it this time...

I love this story! I’ve been reading along avidly and can’t wait for the next instalment. ‘Bonne Foi’ is on my favourites list and there are so many reasons why.

You have an amazing writing style, which is just so easy to read. I honestly cannot compliment you enough on it. There is almost no effort involved whenever I read any of your work; it just picks me up and sweeps me along for the ride. Your writing always flows beautifully; the sentences are so well composed that they read in ideal timing- you have an almost lyrical quality to your work.

I love how your pieces especially ‘Bonne Foi’ are descriptive enough to grab onto my emotions, and to set the scene, but they are never excessive. The never detract from the overall story or bog down the plot development of the chapter. I absolutely love your attention to detail particularly in regards to characterisation- the fact that you have managed to capture Bella and Edward, even after tweaking them slightly to fit your story is so awesome. I’m such a fan of this Edward, I mean we all love over-protective, perfect-gentleman, give-Bella-everything-she-wants Edward, but this is like Edward-with-an-edge. It is so perfect the way you have changed his attitude just slightly to go better with his history. What’s not to love about possessive, sexy, growly Edward?!

Another awesome feature of your story is how close you have stuck to cannon. I absolutely adore how you played out Bella’s ‘Twilight’ events, even without Edward, and their consequences. The truck still coming at her but this time no one is there to save her, and bingo there’s your introduction to the Cullen’s and the reason we don’t have to worry about half-and-half babies. Brilliant! Jake turning wolf and ignoring her, the nomads still going to Forks, and Bella and Edward get caught up in the plot. Just, wickedly clever.

I really admire you for not taking the easy way out and having Edward immediately fall in love, and change completely when he first sees Bella. I’m not saying that can’t work, because really look at Sare Liz’s ‘The Day The Earth Stood Still’ it can totally work, but in your story I’ve loved watching Edward struggle to go from emotionless human-blood drinker, into overloaded-with-emotion animal-blood drinker. The changes he makes and their repercussions are superbly played out.

So, yeah, an amazing story you should be proud of. I’ve loved reading it and look forward to continuing to do so!

P.S- Favourite lines ever!
“because clearly, this town was a death-trap” Oh, my God so true- love the sarcastic tone.

“I trusted them significantly less far than I could throw them” Gotta love the dry humour here!

“because she was precious and wonderful and would comfort a vampire after he’d accidentally broken her” Just makes you want to go aw!

I am SO glad to finally be on the BF wagon!

I jus loved this first chapter and cannot wait to read more!

I know this is going to sound mean, but I'm kind of glad that Bella got a broken leg. I think her getting an injury made it seem more realistic, as much as a story with vampires and werewolves can be. ;)

i like this story better than "twilight"

Yay, at least James is out of the picture, but we know that Victoria is one tough vampire. I'm wondering if her desire to have Edward since she changed him is more powerful than her desire for her partner, probably not, but I can hope! LOL Can't wait for more. Great story!

I was wondering if the werewolves were going to make an appearance. Can't wait to see how Edward reacts or Bella for that matter when they see "Jake"!