great story are you going to continue it?

Gr. Please give me more of that!

LOL ! smart emmett :) the lemon was very HOT !

this was terrific

aw...I think it's kinda cute!!
He couldn't talk to her!!

I usually love oneshots, since I'm often impatient.
HOT. I love shy!Edward, along with domineering!Edward. I knew that they were going to get together, but the anticipation was achingly enjoyable also.
Thanks for writing this fic!

LOVE IT!so cute!now she has her courtesy and she has him!oh,joy!

Fantastic... Keep writing!!

ok well when bella said, "Promise me you won’t not talk to me anymore."
i thought that was a little weak but it is cool.

loved it!

I LOVE IT!

wow...I love this! I know it's a one-shot but you can really add to this story! you should turn it into a full story!

I thought that was really really good and i loved it. it was a little rushed and it doesn't mention how she thought he looked good when she was saying how annoying he was in the beginning, i mean she has seen him before other than that i loved it so much!

aw...very cute!

ok...I love the lemon, i mean who wouldnt?
but the thing is...why cant you just make them fight ot somethin? It would certainly make it better...