Are you ever going to finish this ?

sweet story :)

... what is going on?

I've just finished reading ch.19 and I think the overall story line is great. If you have anytime at all will you update, please. I would love to know what happens next._

Hey :)

Lol, poor Brook, dealing with too many crazy women... I'd be afraid too x3

["Isn't it dangerous for her to be like that?"... "You'd think so, wouldn't you,"] XD That's awesome, yet true. It should be dangerous... lol.

I LOVE THE BANTER! Hehe, it never gets old :D

I love how she can get around like that. Scaling buildings... smooth landings... lol.

Yay, the naming things debate :3 I love Lydia, lol.

I like that she wants to draw him :)

I wonder what he's going to ask her...

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Hey :)

Wow, so she gets a room in the castle :3 I bet she's real excited, lol. Especially since her room is a tad suspicious for her liking...

The jump roping world record is something I really want to know now XD Apparently, it's 27 hours non-stop, and 1,112 jumps. But on the same page, it says 36 hours XD That's too long for me, lol.

I'm not sure why I looked it up... there's a big chance you don't care XD

Hehehe, "Those teenagers." indeed lol.

Whoa, fired. Guess I should have seen that one coming. That, and the fact that she "can't" leave the fancy prison. What a good day! .;

[A girl like her, with such a chaotic lifestyle, should never have friends.] :( I don't care if there's logic to that, it's still sad to have no friends.

Well... now she does. There goes that idea.

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Heylo :)

Hahahaha, Elisa now gets to tell them that she arrested Lydia after she was attacked. Lucky her... really lucky since Brooklyn didn't get mad XD

That mad, anyway.

["She's at your precinct?" "Don't even think about it,"] Hahahaha, I love how innocent he's acting, like he doesn't want to break her out. Please... xD

That flash sounded rather suspicious... and intriguing. I wonder what it was, if anything.

Yay, she's out! Aha! Xanatos bailed her! Lol. I guessed right :3

Brooklyn, why ARE you eavesdropping? That's not polite :3

So she was "injured" a lot. I wonder how that may have happened?

And these sketches that she doesn't remember drawing... very interesting. Either... she's lying. Or she's got DID. Or... secret powers? Anything's possible. However, I doubt she's lying.

I like the "fail" gymnastics. It's a great conclusion to this chapter XD

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Hey :)

Hahaha, Elisa and Lydia will get along so well XD Yet another variable to make things more interesting...

I'd be rambling too if I had the thrill ride she had hehe.

Yay! Action scene! :D Too bad it's those bozos from the first chapter D: But, their bad aim is epic XD

... As is her skills in evasion. Wow.

YAY ELISA TO THE RESCUE! :)

... Uh... yeah, Elisa, just throw her in jail. Cool.

Hopefully someone bails her out soon... hm, who might be able to do it? Perhaps not the Gargoyles, but someone a bit higher up? Like... the almighty rich one? :3 Xanatos would be her biggest hope then? What a sentence XD

Great chapter :)

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Hey :)

Hehehe, poor Brooklyn has to suffer an interrogation from his brothers :3 I feel for him, lol.

["Fine, just keep giving me a hard time. Maybe the next girl I see get attacked I'll glide right past."] XD No way Brooklyn, I don't believe you XD

Oooooh, Lydia shows up, that just makes it all so interesting :3 Aw, Brook's jealous. Well, he did get the attention he wanted. Eventually. Even though it wasn't quite as planned. Lol.

Police reports... that makes me more curious about her past. Very curious.

It would be awesome to shoot spaghetti out of my fingertips. I love the stuff :D

Oh, Puck. Are you up to something? XD

Great chapter :)

thoughtxaquarium

Hello :)

I'm checking out the fics in the Gargoyles section, and I really wanted to see something Brooklyn related :D Thus, why I am here. That, and Lydia sounded rather interesting in your summary :)

Wow... I love this :) I have to say, my favorite sentence though was [How strange, she thought, that she was arguing semantics with a gargoyle.] Hehehehe, that made me laugh xD

I gotta say, I love the interaction so far between her and Brooklyn.

LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE!

Ok, ahem, I'll be back to review even more soon :)

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AWESOME! UPDATE SOON!

Brooklyn the time traveler. One way or another, he has a destiny that is completely different than what the others expected of him. He is a great leader in his own way, but he needs the opportunity to grow into his role without being under Goliath's shadow. Keep up the good work, dark (whew, the whole Lydia-phoenix gate thing threw me for quite the loop!)

Okay, like, wow...So just to be sure I got this straight, the Phoneix sucked Brooklyn into its flames and sent him on his TimeDancer adventure?

UPDATE SOON!

very nice, are you going to continue with a kind of timdancer spinoff :)

OMG! Utterly coolio! Well worth staying up all night to read. . I hope you update soon! The Pheonix Gate being in love with Brooklyn is a wonderfully delicious idea! And now, I want chocolate. See you next chapter (which I will surely review)!