Great story! It'sa very different, but interesting plot. There were times where I couldn't help but burst out laughing! The jokes were realy funny. And Gaara-kun seems so sweet and innocent (squeel!)! I hope that have time to continue soon!

"Like who's this guy Ben Dover and his friend, Master Bates?" Best quote ever. I feel like i should give you a cyber cookie and hug for that. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

OH EMM GEE! I love it... shota..lol... Gaara's ochinchin needed to be milk.lol. XD Im a big pervy

why so flattered? after waiting so long i'm DYING to now what happins. the ling didn't work "sob" TT_TT please e-mail it to me.

P.S the reason i'm asking u in my reviews is because my dads security sysum blocks me from going to ur profile page. TT_TT

hey my computer is blocking chapter 7 for some reason do u think u could e-mail it to me??

Good chapter, keep it up.

On the subject of how I learnt about sex (don't laugh), nobody believes me when I explain it. Right now I'm 19, and my parents never taught me about sex. I figured it out for myself (didn't realize the whole where babies come from until I was in the 11th grade). In my house, we pretend that no one knows anything whatsoever about sex (I was conceived through immaculate conception-- same a Jesus Christ).

I'm totally almost finished drawing my piccy I just can't find my GADDAMN COLORING PENCILS! I PROTEST TO B&W!

I like how you describe the surroundings, the detail gives me a better picture for my imagination. And the trauma and comedy creates a nice heart-warming passion.^^ The only change I'd make is not putting the dialogue in the larger paragraphs. Other than that it's all good! I hope this helped a little.

I love this story, and I can't wait to read the future chapters! I think that I might even draw a picture for you!^^

lol there so innocent an dnavie but thats whats cute about them! hehe can't what for the next chappy

i dang near died from laughing so hard yet so softly (its the middle of the night and all of my "Harem" is sleeping around me(its my BF and his bro lol) still i loved it and will be waiting for updates thank you for shareing

Ah! So cute! I love how they met! YAY GAMAKICHI LIVES! I'm not really an artist I'm a photographer but I draw sometimes so I'll try. It will probably be really crappy but I'll do my best mon capitan! btw, when Sai was young he did have emotions they were just bottled away cause he was all alone after his friend died. So I think this Sai is just fine and I can totally see Sai getting ** over spilled paint. That's probably one of the few things he WOULD get mad about!

Yay nice~! >3 I loved it. The emotion in this chapter was just elegantly put.

I really thought Gamakichi was dead though... Happy endings all round though! It was great n_n

aw! so cute!
Update soon!
Nai Nushi~

I love the idea for this. Can't wait to see what happens next!