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siriuslives394
2009-11-23 . chapter 3
Fantastic.
Judith
2009-11-09 . chapter 3
I think that's the better crap-ish ending I ever got to read.
Nightwing Gurl
2009-10-27 . chapter 3
awee! I loved and enjoyed all the chapters for this story! It was totally interesting. L haunting the apartment Light moved in was an awesome idea. yay! I even loved the part where you included Mello and Near. All in all you did a great job with this story.

NWG
simply anonymous
2009-10-24 . chapter 3
nice. i loved the ending (even though light had to die..) great job with this fic. ^^
Icemask12
2009-10-20 . chapter 3
I liked the first and second chapter, but the third one felt very rushed, like you were just trying to cram everything in to make room for your other fics. I was vaguely disappointed by the ending, because Mikami gets blamed for everything--I guess in this case it couldn't be helped, though, eh? It might have been better if you'd split this last chapter into say, two or three parts--add some more emotion, some more movement. This one just felt very distant.

It did not keep me from enjoying the fic, however. Happy writing!
Icemask12
Vera-Sama
2009-10-20 . chapter 3
I'm sad it was just a three-shot, but I loved it. Especially the thought of both of them being ghosts. I wouldn' mind living in that apartment. xD

Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.
Koolneko22
2009-10-19 . chapter 3
This was great!! I loved it.

I was expecting some kind of twist at the end.

But it's sort of happy...

Keep up the good work.
Monkey and Cookee
2009-10-19 . chapter 3
Oh great ending! Funny chapter too x3
Loved your fic!! xD
MyColdHeart
2009-10-19 . chapter 3
Awe :3
Great story!
Barranca
2009-10-19 . chapter 3
A tragic ending that's not that sad after all for everyone involved... I feel for Light's mother really. She lost first his husband and then his son to Kira.
Hime
2009-10-19 . chapter 3
Strangely enough, Light dying was the perfect ending. Now he and L can really BE best-friends forever (lol).
MissyMurder
2009-10-19 . chapter 3
wah so good!
^^
Sjezza
2009-10-19 . chapter 3
I liked the story very much! It was a short easy read that I enjoyed very much!
Good job!
Erisabeisuu
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please PLEASE! update soon!!
Spottedstar106
2009-06-26 . chapter 2
I couldn't help it. I died laughing when I thought of the looks Mello and Near gave Light after he told his story. Lol

Spottedstar106
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