 siriuslives394 2009-11-23 . chapter 3Fantastic. |
 Judith 2009-11-09 . chapter 3 I think that's the better crap-ish ending I ever got to read. |
 Nightwing Gurl 2009-10-27 . chapter 3awee! I loved and enjoyed all the chapters for this story! It was totally interesting. L haunting the apartment Light moved in was an awesome idea. yay! I even loved the part where you included Mello and Near. All in all you did a great job with this story.
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 simply anonymous 2009-10-24 . chapter 3nice. i loved the ending (even though light had to die..) great job with this fic. ^^ |
 Icemask12 2009-10-20 . chapter 3I liked the first and second chapter, but the third one felt very rushed, like you were just trying to cram everything in to make room for your other fics. I was vaguely disappointed by the ending, because Mikami gets blamed for everything--I guess in this case it couldn't be helped, though, eh? It might have been better if you'd split this last chapter into say, two or three parts--add some more emotion, some more movement. This one just felt very distant.
It did not keep me from enjoying the fic, however. Happy writing!
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 Vera-Sama 2009-10-20 . chapter 3I'm sad it was just a three-shot, but I loved it. Especially the thought of both of them being ghosts. I wouldn' mind living in that apartment. xD
Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next. |
 Koolneko22 2009-10-19 . chapter 3This was great!! I loved it.
I was expecting some kind of twist at the end.
But it's sort of happy...
Keep up the good work. |
 Monkey and Cookee 2009-10-19 . chapter 3Oh great ending! Funny chapter too x3
Loved your fic!! xD |
 MyColdHeart 2009-10-19 . chapter 3Awe :3
Great story! |
 Barranca 2009-10-19 . chapter 3A tragic ending that's not that sad after all for everyone involved... I feel for Light's mother really. She lost first his husband and then his son to Kira. |
 Hime 2009-10-19 . chapter 3Strangely enough, Light dying was the perfect ending. Now he and L can really BE best-friends forever (lol). |
 MissyMurder 2009-10-19 . chapter 3wah so good!
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 Sjezza 2009-10-19 . chapter 3I liked the story very much! It was a short easy read that I enjoyed very much!
Good job! |
 Erisabeisuu 2009-08-05 . chapter 1Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please PLEASE! update soon!! |
 Spottedstar106 2009-06-26 . chapter 2I couldn't help it. I died laughing when I thought of the looks Mello and Near gave Light after he told his story. Lol
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