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rockyshadow
2009-02-21 . chapter 1
That was so cute. I think my favorite part was when Ryan said "Please remind me to continue what I was about to do when we're in New York okay?" I love that Ryan and Kelsi are going to Julliard together.
Orcatje
2009-01-16 . chapter 1
nice:)(Y)
Mizz Deejay Lily
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
So cute. I'm currently imagining Ryan smirking. *mental fan squeal*
M.O.N.S.T.E.R.EATS.POCKY.
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
ryan smirking WOULD BE SO EFFING HAWT ;D
mi-cchii
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
I loved it!~

my mom thinks i'm crazy since i'm screaming (more like "kya-ing" in Japanese).

I really (100x) like it~! and Ryan smirking
[me: OMG! *faints*]...
thanks for the wonderful fic... hope you write more X3
SilverLunarStar
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
*starry eyed* Ryan, smirking... *goes off in LaLaLand*

*Once she comes down from her high:*

That was so sweet! Hahaha, I love how they're the only two Wild Cats couple that are heading to the same school far away from the rest of them. As long as they're together... ^__^

Even though English isn't your first language, you still did a great job. I only saw to little mistakes: it's "Please remind me to continue..." not "Please remember me..." and instead of writing "...he ran down the stairs to meet his and Kelsis parents" (which would be Kelsi's - you forgot an apostrophe) "...he ran down the stairs to meet their parents." It sounds less awkward.

Other than that, everything was great!
digigirl02
2008-11-08 . chapter 1
I liked it.
A.Annie.N
2008-11-07 . chapter 1
aww. So cute! And that smirk! *fans herself* sigh.

Keep writing!

Annie
curlsgrl
2008-11-07 . chapter 1
Ryan smirking = GENIUS ... Just brilliant! :)
Jenifer
2008-11-07 . chapter 1
Oh, I really wanted to see the kiss!
hahahaha
lucy2350
2008-11-07 . chapter 1
I loved this story, it's sweet, and you didn't overdo it.
Keep up the good work!
JDPhoenix
2008-11-06 . chapter 1
Aw, that was sweet. I really liked it and I'm very impressed considering that English is not your first language. Wonderful job.
DC World
2008-11-06 . chapter 1
very cute...and thanks for posting this...it gave me an idea for one of my drabbles...and your english is actually quite good...
Lilah Aine
2008-11-06 . chapter 1
OMG i LOVE it! i wish there was more... i love the teo of them and you did such a good job!! It was wonderful!!
Awahili
2008-11-06 . chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful!
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