 rockyshadow 2009-02-21 . chapter 1That was so cute. I think my favorite part was when Ryan said "Please remind me to continue what I was about to do when we're in New York okay?" I love that Ryan and Kelsi are going to Julliard together. |
 Orcatje 2009-01-16 . chapter 1nice:)(Y) |
 Mizz Deejay Lily 2008-11-26 . chapter 1So cute. I'm currently imagining Ryan smirking. *mental fan squeal* |
 M.O.N.S.T.E.R.EATS.POCKY. 2008-11-15 . chapter 1ryan smirking WOULD BE SO EFFING HAWT ;D |
 mi-cchii 2008-11-10 . chapter 1I loved it!~
my mom thinks i'm crazy since i'm screaming (more like "kya-ing" in Japanese).
I really (100x) like it~! and Ryan smirking
[me: OMG! *faints*]...
thanks for the wonderful fic... hope you write more X3 |
 SilverLunarStar 2008-11-10 . chapter 1*starry eyed* Ryan, smirking... *goes off in LaLaLand*
*Once she comes down from her high:*
That was so sweet! Hahaha, I love how they're the only two Wild Cats couple that are heading to the same school far away from the rest of them. As long as they're together... ^__^
Even though English isn't your first language, you still did a great job. I only saw to little mistakes: it's "Please remind me to continue..." not "Please remember me..." and instead of writing "...he ran down the stairs to meet his and Kelsis parents" (which would be Kelsi's - you forgot an apostrophe) "...he ran down the stairs to meet their parents." It sounds less awkward.
Other than that, everything was great! |
 digigirl02 2008-11-08 . chapter 1I liked it. |
 A.Annie.N 2008-11-07 . chapter 1aww. So cute! And that smirk! *fans herself* sigh.
Keep writing!
Annie |
 curlsgrl 2008-11-07 . chapter 1 Ryan smirking = GENIUS ... Just brilliant! :) |
 Jenifer 2008-11-07 . chapter 1 Oh, I really wanted to see the kiss!
hahahaha |
 lucy2350 2008-11-07 . chapter 1I loved this story, it's sweet, and you didn't overdo it.
Keep up the good work! |
 JDPhoenix 2008-11-06 . chapter 1Aw, that was sweet. I really liked it and I'm very impressed considering that English is not your first language. Wonderful job. |
 DC World 2008-11-06 . chapter 1very cute...and thanks for posting this...it gave me an idea for one of my drabbles...and your english is actually quite good... |
 Lilah Aine 2008-11-06 . chapter 1OMG i LOVE it! i wish there was more... i love the teo of them and you did such a good job!! It was wonderful!! |
 Awahili 2008-11-06 . chapter 1Absolutely wonderful! |