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StoryTagger
2009-03-28 . chapter 4
You know, if you are going to have each on of Yuna's Guardians becoming a Summoner then with Auron you would have to do it before he is killed by Yunalesca. Seymour lost the ability to Summon when he 'died' so the same would be true for Auron. I do wonder though, what type of power would an Aeon powered by a Summoner Fayth have? I mean a Summoner that has gained the right to Summon various Aeons. I wonder if there would be some mark of those rights in the Summoner Aeon's form...sorry just thinking out loud...
Swordsoul2000
2009-03-06 . chapter 4
interesting premise. who is the last of yuna's guardians to become a summoner? like how all of them fail in some way. wakka is the most succesful in that he makes it all the way to fighting sin in his segment, but does nothing to halt the spiral of death that is Spira's relationship with sin. Lulu dies at the hand of Yojimbo, Kimari is turned away because he has no guardians, and for all of Rikku's piety and bravery as a summoner, cannot lift the veil of stigma for the al bhed. great work. one of the impressions that i'm getting reading this, is that only yuna could defeat sin for good, and bring the eternal calm, and that only with the support of her guardians. i'm looking forward to the last chapter
our soliloquy
2009-03-03 . chapter 4
I really like this. I can't wait to read more. :D

But Kimahri's little story made me sad xDD
madHATTERo0
2009-02-27 . chapter 3
:O No! Poor Kimahri! All that work, just to be told he failed because he did it alone. That's so sad. But amazingly written. :) So who's next?
munchinmonster
2009-02-25 . chapter 3
Well it is definetly different from the other stuff you see on here.

It is very good and I like it, each chapter seems to be better then the one before and Kimari's chapter was beyond excellent. I hope you keep this up as I would love to read more.

munchin
StoryTagger
2009-01-20 . chapter 1
Haha, wow that was pretty cool! At the end he got a Knights of the Round type of Aeon. Totally awesome! I'm pretty sure they will be able to beat Yu Yevon. Great Story! :)
Rubel
2008-11-06 . chapter 1
Neat. Well written. I would definitley like to see more of this.
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