Aww! So sweet! ^.^

Cute. GA/BC forever! People are always trying to set them up with other characters, and I get so frustrated! They're like the Lois and Clark of non-journalists! They're just MEANT to be together!

Okay, I like the story, I really do. There are a few things I'd work on though. One, you might want to have someone go over it after your beta reader. Some of the sentences don't flow very well and the tense is off a bit, which slows things down and makes it awkward. Secondly, if your story has a song in it, or even part of one, make sure you give credit to the artist. Keep writing.

There is not much on the Ollie/Dinah pairing in this forum, so this fic was a bit like a piece of gold to me. There really should be more out there on this pairing. Great job!