i like and man this is good keep it up.:)

Wow! Just wow...

Probably the most creative fan fiction I've ever read. I love the direction you've taken with this. Please continue with the story, I can't wait for the next installment.

haha.

Nice!

Great series! What every nation on Earth could take a lesson from ;-)

Interesting to see HOW they got all the metals.

Keep up the awesome series!

Good work Ed!

So very well done!

Great work Ed, this truly good stuff! I wish you could update more. Nice!

Great story, you managed to bring back my interest in the Battletech universe after I lost faith. Thank you.

As to EO's origins, my guess is SCA or NRA.

Oh and if you do need info on Halo check out Halopedia & Halofanon, by the way on Halofanon I personally recommend checking out an author named Ajax 013's work some of it you have to see to believe.

Will Anton Marik still kill Joshua Wolf? Do these kyfhons use mechs or are they like armies such as Halo's UNSC in favoring vehicles & infantry over mechs? Would it be possible to include people & vehicles from the Halo universe to your story or if not everything then how about just Cortana & Master Chief?

Great work this time Ed! Keep it up!

Great job on another chapter! Keep up the good work!

Khyfhons: the libertarians of the BT universe. I don't believe that particular philosophy has been displayed all that prominently in the BT-verse, has it?

Just one chapter, and I'm *already* liking this Broker character of yours. He reminds me of a cross between Tony Stark (from the recent Iron Man movie) and V (for Vendetta). Very nicely done.

If the Clans or Inner Sphere get wind of this, there could be hell to pay (for them) if they react in the wrong way. Remember the Swiss? There's a reason Hitler never dared to invade them; their retort to the Germans, "Then we'll just have to shoot twice," comes to mind here.

I will be looking forward to your next chapter. Good luck and Godspeed.

Cool!

Hello Ed! It's me Bien from the Philippines! Long time no hear! Congrats on the Mechwarrior story, I didn't know you also knew about mw! Are you still helping out with ATV written by Albert G? Any way, nice work! Keep it up! From your long-time fan from the ATV days, Bien!

So very well done! Love to see how this changes the timeline! Not to mention what your gonna do with all those Pikes.