i like the ending but you could have dun a lot more with it :D or you could jst do a sequel which would be kwl too but over all good story :D

why dose he want sarah sarahs mum and toby f*ing weird ;/

Yaay, I loved this story, excellent job!

nice end to the chapter... can't wait to see where you take it now!

Ah! This is the most teasing epilogue I've ever read! They're supposed to end the story, not make me believe there's more. You're a tease, a veritable tease. Now I have to go read the other story you mentioned. XD I love you.

This was just great! I loved the whole thing and I'm glad it got the ending it deserves. Though this one seems a bit epilogy in and of itself... *stares at the next chapter button* I gotta go!

wtf is that it?!?!
oh c'mon Elisabeth!
is there like some Epilouge of the epilouge?
say there is!!

*squee*! Thanks for the epilogue it was great. I love how you tied it back to the beginning. Very smooth and nice. Great way to end the story. Congrats!

NO!

BAH! It's not that I don't love this, it's just...that...you said...no sequal and yet this epilogue not only begs for a sequal, it makes it's own pleading campaign complete with posters, tv and radio commercials and a special song sung by a myriad of stars called "Don't Leave Us Hanging". Before the epilogue I could have lived without a sequal but now, NOW...GAH! (explodes in a burst of glitter)

Thank you for sharing this reading with us. Keep smiling. :-)

And? I want to know more! It's neat that you brought the story full circle by echoing your opening and all, but... but... I want more! lol I won't force you to do more, but I do agree with janeitesarah, and epilogure part 2 sounds really good! I must say it again, Brava! You certainly have done well! :)

Wonderful. If you don't feel like a sequel, you could always find someone else to do it and make it a series. Of course it's your story.

No!! That's not nice. You can't stop there *runs away to cry in a corner*

We need an epilogue part 2! I want to know what happens with Sarah and Jareth now!

Great post!

And then?