Hi, I just wanted to let you know that I love love love this story :D Also, in chapter 12, not being picky, but it says that Ben has never even thought about buying a gun, but in one of the earlier chapters right as he's running away, you mention that he thought about buying a gun but didn't because his mom didn't like weapons in the house. Just thought you might want to know :3

poor janitor

did you ever make a sequel?

Wow, this story is just great. I couldn't stop reading and now that I'm through, I'm regretting it wasn't longer. LOVED it! :)

aw, i like this story a lot. there need to be more stories about ben and dean. so what do ya say? sequle? please?

aww! I loved it!

This was a great story. A sequel would be wonderful

Rachel

Hope there's a sequel!

Loved this story. I've always wanted Ben to be Dean's son. Still holding out hope but not sure if Kripke and co. will see fit to go back and revisit it later.

So... we have to beg for a sequel or are you gonna be nice? lol.

Love the ending. very profound and thoughtful. I would definitely love a sequel. couple years down the road though. excellent job.

plz plz update! yay! they got the trickster!

oh... what was the secret?

plz plz update! this is so good!

nice, the boys bickering is always a good add in to the story

Haha, I can so see this happening in supernatural... Everybody thinks its the creepy janitor, muttering about killing things and stabbing metal poles in the ground, who is the bad guy - but really its a bunch of (possessed? ghost-y?) moles.

One little grammar thing though - I noticed on the second-to-last paragraph it says "stopped pumping air into his lounges." I'm assuming you meant lungs?

Anyways, great chapter. Now I have to go read more :)