Here are some more burning questions for ya. Will Squall ever come back? Is he still alive? Will the curse be lifted off of him and Raine? Will Squall and Rinoa be together?

BRING SQUALL BACK TO LIFE, !

Aww, Optical Goddess... did ya have to go an ruin for everyone? *glowers* Was I that obvious? Admittedly, it's the only way I could continue the fic...

Aww, very tragic I know, Rinoa's pregnant and that's why she's not been feeling well, and the baby will have the dark secret...

Absolutely charming! Poor Raine! Poor Squall! Hell...poor Rinoa, even! I like how you have Rinoa actually doing useful things in this fic instead of just sitting around whining. A decided improvement over the game. )

This is starting to look interesting. I like it already! I believe you're a talented writer.

good but i prefered the split prose of the 1st 3 chapters!

come on more more more

this is terrific! I just love it... it's definitely one the coolest series I've read in a long while. i absolutely loved "when darkness falls(it was so sad when squall was hurting rinoa) but hopefully this one will have a happier ending! and i love raine, too!)

Aw man! This is good. I liked the way When Darkness Falls ended, it wasn't exactly happy ending, but this story is a nice continuation.