ROAR! More? It's absoloutly wonderful, even the murder of the bug (I personally have done many things similar, only with cans of lysol and moths). I like your writing style--it's easy to follow and really interesting, and I look forward to seeing Hikaru's reaction to Kaoru!

That was very good. I really liked Hikaru's history of bug murders XD. I hope you continue this story, I really want to read more.

Aw, I liked this. Even AU Hikaru was so in-character. It was great. I hope you write more soon.

hi
i luved
wen will u be writin more?

Uwah, that was so hilarious! XD I wonder how the caterpillar got in his pants in the first place...anyway, I'll be awaiting the next chapter happily! ^^

"may the force be with you" lol:)

If my pet rabbit can fly first-class then so can Hikaru! That is a true story. I laughed so hard and I can't wait to see what happens with Kaoru.

o.O~~ I never liked centipedes~~ Mwahahahah~

I found the centipede part to be deeply distrubing..seriously, that touched something strange. That's sorta weird. Keep writing it though!! I wanna hear the rest.

Haha, I love it. Why am I not surprised? It was so in-character. XD Absolutely great. Seriously. Please update soon.

very nice poor centipede and creepy old guy write more please

Haha, I love the caterpillar part. Just the fact that a caterpillar might say fuck in a squeaky voice cracks me up. Yes, I know, I'm completely immature, totally proves that I won't fit in at a high-class part of an airplane (means I get to sit next to Hikaru =D).
Anyways, interesting plot, I'm absolutely looking forward to your next chapter, so keep writing, and um-- update soon =D

--AT

I really like where this is going so far.

I like the way you write and I like the idea that you have. It should be fun seeing Hikaru struggle with dealing with his gay brother!

I hope you continue this!

Well written introduction! Very nice length and very good us of all elements supplied! There was actually a point being made here, about introducing Hikaru, and it was very obvious. Great job!!
I can't wait to see how Kaoru turns out and all the hillarities that will ensue! Please continue :)

The plot seems quite interesting. :D Carry on, carry on.