This is a very deep story, I like it. However the tenses were off on some points which was a little distracting to me.

poor shuuhei :(
damn Aizen he should just drop dead !
but this story is great well writen and everything

So when are Shuhei & Renji going to meet up again?

Poor Shuuhei. How is he going to get out of this predicament. Aizen is sure one big meanie. When will Shuuhei see Renji again? And can he save him?

Sounds interesting so far. I look forward to the whole story.