I like your descriptions and, albeit short, plot. Can you tell me who the person dying is? Rokudo Mukuro? Tsuna?
Katekyo hitman reborn is a very good anime/manga. Does Rokudo Mukuro die though when he fights Byakuran?
If you're still writing, keep up the good work! That picture on your profile is Rokudo Mukuro huh? That's so cool.
Good job!
--pizzabagels

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