Wow, that was so moving! You had my crying there at one stage. Beautifully written and I loved the ending with Tony choosing to turn back time to save McGee. That was so sweet. :) Loved it, thank you
Kar, xx

Absolutely fantastic story. Truly brought tears to my eyes and I love that Tony was willing to risk his own life for McGee's. I don't think I'll ever be able to watch that ep again without thinking of this. Great work.

-Moki

This was great too!

Wow! That is just phenomenal.

aw, so sad ans sweet.

Loved the story it was great nice work!

I truly enjoyed this story. Not that Tim dies but that Tony with his true feelings decided to take Tim's place and will live and allow Tim to live...This was a great turn in a tag. You did great. Sue

aw! Tim! Tony!! ::sniffs:: well done!

Great 'what if' and well written.

I'm satisfied with SWAK, it's one of my all-time favorite NCIS episodes and wouldn't change a thing however it makes for great fanfic!

I LOVE it! It hurt to read but the ending made it all better! Thanks for sharing this story with us! *hugs you*

This is fantastic. I don't know about it being a prequel, just because it stands so well on it's own. An amazing amazing story. You captured the emotions and characters so well, even Gibbs' and the other's reactions with so much power without lots of extra words. Really well written. So sad, too. Loved it.

Interesting twist. I enjoyed it. Very believable Tony reactions and *snicker* Tim's get a room comment dead on.

I really liked this story, very emotional and I think you captured the inner turmoil of Tony very well

I really like how this turned out, Very well done. Your writing is really quite good.

Thanks for Contributing and letting us read your work

Kira