DAMN.

DAMN, YO.

This was simultaneously incredibly creepy, and really hot and interesting as well. I really, *really* loved this story.

YOU MADE ME SAD D:

that was...well, it was really good actually. It held a purpose and all that crap the English teachers tell you to have in an essay that I can't think up right now because it's too early for that sort of thought process, but still held that loose and easy flow with only the slightest bit of tension lying underneath the tone. Am I making sense? XD

Anyway, it was awesome. It was hot and made me sad, but in a way that wasn't entirely a bad thing because you probably wanted to relay some sort of emotion and that's definitely one that works.

HIGH FIVE :D

This was nice. I really enjoyed how you wrote Axel's character. It was very real, even though he's something that isn't real at all. And I really loved your ending author's note as well. Heheh. The gods know how often that happens to writers.

Thank you very much for sharing this! It made for a wonderful read!

That was quite hot and quite sad.
But beautiful non-the-less

omg that was SAD, i almost wanted to cry for rox

OH I LOVED IT! I cried at the end, and I don't even know why. Wierd.

Oowow.
This is the first fic I've seen that really dealt with the "no emotions" thing so well. A little fucked up, this Axel, but very good. I do like this very much. ♥