I for one am intrigued and would like to hear more.

Hey, I would like to see more!

Please update soon it's been a really long time and I want to find out what happens next.

Please update this story soon if you can!

I think that this is wonderful. Keep on updating and don't let us down! :) okay so I'll leave you to give us the second chapter. I have a strange feeling that this is going to be epic.

i love this fic! i have hardly any suggestions save the thought that the summary makes it sound like Atonement-Narnia style. I do hope thats not the case. it is quite a sweet little gem here. good luck!

Please update soon!

Excellent chapter. I hope that Linnel will be able to win Queen Susan's heart. Please update soon.

very different, but I love it. MORE!

Oh! I love it! Another great story! I was so excited when I saw you'd written another Narnia story (You've been doing a lot of Twilight ones lately and as I don't like twilight, I haven't been reading them and I missed your stories).
This story is really good. it's most certainly a new idea for the Narnian fandom. I think Linnel is a good character and I would like to see if he ever actually gets together with Susan or not.
This also reminds me of various fairy tales that I can't quite put my finger on. Anyway, this is great, I love it. Please update soon.

what my name says.

OMG, that has got to be the most vivid thing you have ever written. I could see everything perfectly, and even when you described Linnel's love I even felt like I really did love Susan! And you make her sound so beautiful in this. I love, love it so much, and please do updaye!


XOX

I have to say that this was AMAZING. I loved the vivid descriptions, your take on the intoxicating feeling of love, the whole ONE GLANCE FALL IN LOVE thing was ver romantic, actually. And I loved it. Please continue. I should love to see what the misunderstanding you say in your story is.