THat was great good ending

Wow. Just... wow. The ending is just... wow.

Okay, sorry for my temporary lack of descriptive words. Anyways, this has been an amazing fic, written in a very unique way, and even though I'm glad for a brilliant ending, I'll miss it a lot.

Aw, what a sweet way to end this story! I'm seriously closing in on teary over it. It was that last line that did me in.

You really captured Grissom's workaholic nature, and how it appears to his coworkers. I've left a workaholic coworker sitting at his desk many times knowing very well that he'll be in before me the next morning. I always tell him that if he's in the same clothes the next day, I'm going to be very concerned. :-P I think that what you showed with Nick really conveys that same sense of "does this guy ever go home?" And, in Grissom's case...probably not.

And, I love that Nick was the one to get Grissom to see what he was doing to himself and to Sara. It would be Nick to point Grissom in the right direction without ever realizing it. I love it.

This was a great story. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Very nicely ended, well worth the wait. Thanks for sharing.

Awesome chapter! Poor Nicky, he seems to miss Warrick the most, even if he doesn't let it show.

I'm glad Warrick was able to get through to him and glad Grissom finally understood what Nick was saying even though he should have realized it on his own ages ago.

I just really really really really hope that Sara comes back in tonights eppy or at least he leaves to be with her XD

Wow I totally loved this chapter, it's so different than the others! It's not as weird as you think it is, not if you watch Ghost Whisperer :P

I think the way you showed how Warrick felt and what he saw was great and most likely spot on and now I cant wait for the next part to see how he's gonna get through to nick and what he's gonna do :D

Update soon and I hope you had a wonderful Christmas :D

THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER

You included Warrick very thoughtfully, in the process setting Nick's chapter up beautifully...I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes...Well done.

I love how you don't let a petty something like death obstruct you in your quest to write the best you can. Wow. I hope death really is like that, gone but not really GONE, seeing but not doing. I guess if death were like that, and we knew, we wouldn't rush to do things like watch sunsets before we die. Anyways, I'm getting excited about the ending to this story, whenever it may come. I'm wondering about how you'll end it, but I'm positive you'll do it masterfully.

Oh, now this is interesting! I love the way you worked Warrick in, and I absolutely ADORE the idea that he'll be the one (via Nick) to ultimately convince Grissom to go after Sara. I kept wondering when and how you'd handle Nick's chapter...but, now I see why you've waited. It's just too perfect. Oh, my gosh, I'm so excited to read it! I almost never make this request, but please update soon!

Wow. I really enjoyed this chapter of your story. I love the Ghost Whisperer thing with Warrick. It really made me think of the episodes, and I could really see everything going on in my head! It created great pictures! Your an amazing write, and I can`t wait for the next chapter.

I think it would be incredibly hard to be Riley. She really did walk into an awful situation, but I think she's making the best of it. And, I think that Greg is probably a big help with that. He seems like he's gone out of his way to befriend her, and I think you captured that really well here. Great job!

You know, this makes a very good point about Hodges. I wonder if he'll take a lesson from Grissom's missteps with Sara and apply it to his own relationship (assuming he has one) with Wendy. Goodness knows he stalker enough to know everything that's happened between Grissom and Sara! LOL

Ok...who's up next?

If only...

Great chapter