 JonBob 5/10/11 . chapter 6 The sap in me approves of this story. You have a pretty good writing style (perhaps a few run-on sentences) and an interesting narration style.
It might have been nice to have a Rika chapter (an intriguing character) but it happens.
I was wondering where you were going with the last chapter, but you worked it out well. And Kaho deserves happiness. I suppose I've come around to Ciircee's view of her. |
 Tommy-yomz 10/11/10 . chapter 6I thought tomy-chan and eri-kun will be together but I guess not, ne? |
 RedWingedAngel002 8/14/07 . chapter 1OMG THAT WAS TO FRICKEN CUTE XD AH *mind explosion* XD lol! yeah sorry... dont mind the oddeness XD
Ari chan |
 afaphyte 10/16/04 . chapter 6IM DISAPPOINTED! VERY VERY VERY SAD! *sniff* I thought it was an ExT fic... So I read it till the end but no... *sigh...* But still This is still one heck of a story! It's unique! But still... UPDATE ASAP! |
 Pavane 7/22/04 . chapter 6hmm...i vote for Rika-chan. Haven't heard many of her stories yet. |
 Crystal-One 7/21/04 . chapter 6Sweet, each one of them. Very well written! And I liked the personal touch of first person narrative in most of them _ |
 Becca 1/25/04 . chapter 4 I said I'd write another review and here it is! And it's a good review, too! Great story! I haven't read Meiling's part yet, but that's just because I have homework. Will read later! |
 Becca 1/25/04 . chapter 1 Hi! This is a review for the first chapter of 'Ichiban', which is really good so far!
You're the webmistress of 'Enchanted Fairytales', right? I found the link to your fanfics on 'Release'.
But anyway...
Your first chapter definately accomplished it's purpose; I found myself saying 'Aw... CE OT!' so many times it's scary. and also digging my nails into my palms. ...because it was so cute.
Thanks for writing, and please email me! I'll write another review when I've finished "Ichiban". Bye!
-Becca |
 pokey 1/18/04 . chapter 1I love it. And I wanted to thank you, there are so many AUs here that sometime it seems impossible to find a really good cannon based CCS story, so thank you for giving us one. |
 CherryBlossom-Chan 11/17/03 . chapter 1HANYAAN! Completely adorable! The 1st chapter brought so many tears to my eyes! Soo kawaii! CB-Chan |
 Neko-chan4 3/3/03 . chapter 1GAH! You do it again! Don't ever stop being so wonderfully sappy! I almost cried even more w/this one; I feel like poor Syaoran when he first began blushing around Sakura-"Damn it! What's wrong with me?
This fic was so perfectly sweet. And don't ever feel self-conscious about that-that's what CCS is all about, and unlike some other series that try to be like that w/their love stories (i.e. Fushigi Yuugi the overplayed romance between Miaka Tamahome), CLAMP pulls it off perfectly. As do you. I'm sure a lot of people I know would agree that I come off as very anti-sappy (I'm a bit of a tomboy at times), but when it comes to CLAMP works, I'm a sucker for all that saccharine sweetness. So good work w/this! _ (Sorry-I'm also very long-winded apparently.) |
 trimurti 2/15/02 . chapter 3I really like this! This series is very cute, fluffy, and kinda inspiring. I really like how it's around the entire premise of a fairy tale dance...makes everything more romantic. Now to do the chapters in order...
I liked the Sakura story, and I'm wondering about the clover thing...was that an allusion to the CLAMP series Clover? If it was, that was a very good insertation!
The Naoko story was slightly depressing, in that she didn't have anyone and she felt bad about that, but it was very nicely done in the aspect of her knowing that one day she'll have her own prince (she's not in the last manga? How sad...).
And the Yamazaki story...I have been looking for a Takashi/Chiharu fic for the longest time, and you delivered what I thought was the best scenario for them. The beginning brought tears to my eyes!
Each chapter keeps on getting better and better, and I'm anxiously awaiting more! |
 Asuka 12/26/01 . chapter 2 wow that was a real cute story. And you wrote it well that I can imagine it in my head...::applause _ by the way.. guess who! D . |
 fireblazie 12/25/01 . chapter 2nice! write one about eriol and tomoyo! |
 ArcherAngelAnna 12/25/01 . chapter 2 hanyaan...that's so kute! I love Nao-chan fics, cuz she deserves her special someone too...kawaii...Keep writing, ur fics are so kute!Onegai, feel free ta drop me an e-mail when you post up a new chapter to Ichiban (such a kute title! _)! Post more soon! Keep writing!Ja mata! A shoujo manga kawaii fics lover |