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Grey Pigeon
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
So here it is, another time in Rivendell, another blessed period in this magical valley and all Legolas could dream of was the better weather. But on the second thought, what means little rain in comparison with Estel?

Another time you captured me by beauty of the plot. You can make even briefest of glances a meaningful experience. Well, Estel and Legolas had finally talked, they are beginning to know each other better. Both a little scared, neither one prepared, as one had said.

Estel is very...shy in Mithrin series. As if he was abashed of something. And although I still can't imagine why on Arda would he be afraid of old good Mithrandir (maybe because I still have "kind-hearted grandpa" sir Ian before my eyes) I would be abashed too in Estel's shoes. Being elven means much to him.

What else? Mischievous twins and nonchalant Glorfindel are good, but the pillow fight was even better! "Who would count their years in halves?"^^

Only one thing is worrying me - what is happening in Mirkwood?...

Great work, dear!

Grey Pigeon
tmelange
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
This series has a distinct beauty in the way you've developed the narrative. Legolas and Estel have very little interaction, but every single connection is so momentous. The whole story has such tension and gravitas. Bravo!
Marius The Roman
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
Wow... It's just so touching. And sad. Poor Legolas, leaving his Estel. And they were just getting to know each other. Ah well, I must read on!
keks
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
oh your story is so beautiful ... I just love the way you write, the choice of the words and the content
it truely touched my heart and made me smile

I really really hope you'll write another part of mithrin very soon

keep on writing! (even it isn't a LOTR fanfiction ^..~)


greetings from germany,
Xannie52
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
I love it, is there gonna be a part I?:D
Rose-Dragonfire
2008-11-20 . chapter 1
I have read this and the first one so far...I love them! X3
I can't wait to read more of course. ^^
Krahl
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
I really love your stories. They are subtle, incredibly romantic and simply lovely. Are you planning to continue this series?
TheBoltShapedScar
2008-11-09 . chapter 1
Why did he have to leave like that? *pouts* Again, extremely well written. And you're Swedish! Jeg er selv fra Danmark, men mit engelske er slet ikke så godt som dit, desværre
baby green eyes
2008-11-08 . chapter 1
MARSHMALLOW!! I HOPE NOBODY REVIEWED BEFORE ME..I want to stick to my promise, or my promise to myself, lol. YESS, I HOPE I'M THE FIRST REVIEWER, AHAHH!

Okii. *takes deep breath* Just let me say that..this story..was..absolutely amazing. Awesome. Amazome, we shall call it. Fantastico. Wonderful. Mind-blasting. Rainbow explosion. Except with Humans and Elves. Roar!!

I just watched Madagascar 2 yesterday and..in the movie, there was this really really funny part with the hippos..and I automatically thought of this for some reason..lmao it goes like this, "(bum bum bum bum)..I like em BIG!..I like em JUICY! I like em CHUNKEHH!" and this humongous hairy hippo who thinks hes a love god waddles out of water in this suave manner, ahahah!!

I certainly hope Legolas doesnt like em chunky, because as far as we know, Estel was always lean and fit and rawrr..

SO ANYWAYS..This was heartbreakingly beautiful!! Seriously, at the end I was like, NUU! And how Legolas left, aww, it was soo sad..and Estel had no idea, he was like, "*lip wobbles" Legolas..?"

And I LOVED the pillow fight and how observatent both of them are of each other and how they sat together with the stars and how Estel is a total mystery to him and yet everything he does makes Legolas fall more in love with him, its like they were meant for each other all along (they SO WERE, anyone who says otherwise, MEET OUTSIDE AFTER SCHOOL, BUB, 4:30, NO LATER!!).

And Estels first word to him was OH! Hehehehe..Major cute. And I love how both of them could just stare at each other for like..YEARS, and never get bored or anything. Wow. *drools*

MITHRANDIR YOU **! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO TAKE LEGOLAS AWAAY?! *glares at you* Marshmallow, dear, you know what this means, dont you? *sigh* I am going to have whine and whine and whine until I get something out of you, you clever secretive person, you, and beg until you tell me if they are going to see each other again and what time they will see each other and IF THEY EVER KISS, MY GOD, THEY ARE BOTH *ASKING* FOR IT, I just wanted Elladan and Elrohir to just sigh exasperately and grab their little brother and the blonde elf and just THROW them in a closet and LOCK IT FOR ETERNITY until some friction happens, seriously. Or some major snogging, doesnt really matter to me, you know..

THEY WERE *THIS* CLOSE, TOO! And they were just getting to KNOW each other, and Estel and Legolas didnt get to say GOODBYE and now they wont see each other for like a billion yeaars and thats awful and terrible and horrible and I just cant think of a worse enough punishment for them, except if one of them dies of course, BUT DONT THINK OF THAT, lest you get ideas..*looks at you suspiciously* Ahem, um, cupcakes anyone?

Oh and the title was perfect, of course. Seeing You fit the story of the first one, cus they only SEE each other, never speak, cus theyre both shy and TOTALLY WANT EACH OTHER, they should just scream it out at the top of their lungs ITS SO OBVIOUS, and then Hearing You is perfect as well cus they finally speak and get to know one another and all..*sniffles* Even if it does end sadly and rather tragically..HIS BEBEH IS LEAVING HIM, MARSHMALLOW, HOW COULD YOU STAND TO BEAR IT?!?

You know, I believe 'Feeling You' would be perfect if you were ever going to make another one *coughHINTcough* and they finally..you know..feel. *sniggers* They saw, and they heard, and they dont really want to SMELL cus thats awkward, so there is taste and feel/touch left..cough cough hint hint poke poke nudge nudge nudge, lol..

I THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS BELOVED STORY AND ITS MY FAVORITE FAVORITE FAVORITE AND SO IS SEEING YOU AND NOW I SHALL GO TO 'AN' AND BEAT THAT PERSON UP, KAY? I HOPE U GET A BILLION REVIEWS FOR THIS, *AFTER* MINE, LOL, I HAVE OT BE THE FIRST ONE..

~BGE =D IS =D LOVING =D ThIS =D STORY =D
AND =D HER =D AUTHOR
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