 fireprincess 2009-11-03 . chapter 37 Hi! I totally loved your fic! I know I haven't reviewed any of your chapters or stories, but the truth is I've read every single one of them (concerning Avatar, that is) and I found all of those interesting and beyond what I would've expected from any writer here on fanfiction. I read a lot, but I don't review much, although for this case I would like to make an exception beause, as I said, I loved your fic. Do hurry on with the finale, I can't wait! Seriously, I check your story for updates on a daily basis, not exaggerating. So please do hurry up, otherwise all your fans will die from the suspense and the thrill!
Anyway, keep it up and regards! |
 K9 the First 2009-10-21 . chapter 36Oh crap! I'd think the character coming up is Pan Ding... But I never discussed him with you in much length.
Plus there are many differences between your Blue Spirit and Painted Lady and mine that would affect him. |
 MungoJerry 2009-10-17 . chapter 37*wriggles in anticipation*
Glee! XD |
 Dragon Firebender84 2009-10-17 . chapter 37If it's anything like the chapters that I've seen, then it will be awesome ending. This story is great and I've loved the entire journey and can't wait to see the ending to it. |
 hj 2009-10-16 . chapter 37 I doubt this story could disappoint anyone. I grossly underestimated your writting abilities. This story has far surpassed any fanfiction I have ever read, in plot and storyline. This story must have taken alot of thought. If Avatar was real this would definitly be part of it. |
 Beloved-Stranger 2009-10-06 . chapter 36That was so awsum...I might die. I think my favourite line was, "Did you eat something that disagreed with you?" followed by Yan-sui's almost facepaw.
Also: I do not like Pi Li. I think he needs to be eaten, or sat on by someone larger than him at the very least. I also think Shao should volunteer. |
 MungoJerry 2009-10-04 . chapter 36Glee!! What a pleasure to see an update! XD And I thought the action was all over! How wrong I was. Haha! I must say, though, I miss Rinzen already.
I think the "intimate activity" was handed very tastefully and the prose was lovely.
Happy writing! Till the next chapter! :D |
 hj 2009-07-31 . chapter 35 This story is amazing I haven't read a story this well thought out, and well written before in Fanfiction, I congradulate you on this story so far. |
 MungoJerry 2009-07-26 . chapter 35Ye!! (shakes hands around like a ninny) What's HAPEN-NING what's GOING TO HAP-PEN TO THEM-!! D8 yan-SUI-! (head spins) |
 MungoJerry 2009-07-26 . chapter 343': (hugs demon)
No fair!! |
 Kristoshi Warrior 2009-07-24 . chapter 35Wow, that was really spectacular, I've never read another story like it, with the double plot-line and the complex twists and turns, it is an amazing read. Again, love the double update, and I can't tell you how much I look forward to reading each additional chapter. :D
...the story isn't over, is it?
Update soon! :)
Kristoshi |
 Beloved-Stranger 2009-05-19 . chapter 33You! You and your infernal cliffhangers! Oh-whee, this had to be one of the most brilliant chapters yet. I'm reeling...what a battle. I know it sucks killing off characters, but at least you gave them one hell of a leaving party. Poor Uutu...I have the sneaking suspicion not even his awesome pants will be save him this time. |
 2009-05-18 . chapter 33 Awesome new chapter, can't wait for more! |
 MungoJerry 2009-05-17 . chapter 33*hums a song for the fallen demons, strokes their heads in sleep*
It'd hurt me, too. I liked Anu. It all happened so fast! |
 Cheated Of Between 2009-03-22 . chapter 31oh cliff-hanger. great story, you really think of all the aspects of demon thought/life/tradition that are so different from what's considered the norm. you don't take the littlest thing for granted.
awesome backstory on Yan-sui. don't leave us hanging for too long. |