Oh, cute! They bicker so much, it'd be unnatural for them not to get together. All that defensiveness is nicely characterised. And I ADORE the idea of Trixie harbouring a big girly crush on His Rotteness. ^^

i liked this.

honestly, next to Kitty's, this is the best set up for these two i've seen. they stay completely in character, while still being out of character completely. if that makes any sense.

i hope to see more from you in the future, if you plan on continuing in this fandom at all.

Hey there, welcome to the LT fandom!

I really like what you've started here. An interesting, and (I think) unique, love triangle with Stingy, Trixie and Robbie. I also really enjoyed the banter between the two of them; very believable.

I have to agree with MASC, though - this has *so* much more potential than just a one-shot. Robbie and Stingy competing for Trixie's affections...now that's something I'd love to see.

Any chance? I'm putting this story on my alerts, just in case you're amenable to begging...

Kitty

PS You don't need to feel like a lone voice crying in the wilderness, by the way...MASC is doing a sterling job of it in his epic series, and I've written them as a couple myself...but hey, the more the merrier! ;-)

Now this? This is good. No. This is VERY good. I like the clever play on words between the two and the outcome was pretty nice. But can I be honest with you? IT CAN'T END HERE!

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...Um, sorry about that. Like I was saying, you should really think about expanding the story a little bit. I see lots of potential in this and I'd hate to think of what future readers will miss out on. Anyway, just a thought! Great job!