|Reviews for Christmas at the Burrow|
| bellaedwardginnyharry 1/19/12 . chapter 1
| PetitMoi207 3/7/11 . chapter 1
good, but went to fast for me to get into it
| ginny 8/24/09 . chapter 1
| andrea 8/12/09 . chapter 1
great more please
| Unashamed1 12/22/08 . chapter 1
"Don't let the Nargles sneak into your head under the mistletoe!" That was perfect-authentic Luna-and the idea of the rest of the gruop recieving gifts from Luna at the Burrow is a lovely touch, as well.
Of course, the Harry\Ginny moment was sweet, but I almost wished that it could've lasted just a little longer: perhaps a touch more conversation before the kiss, and\or more description of the awkwardness. In fact, the main suggestion I would offer for this fic is, "more detail," over all. You have the roots of some very nice moments, here, but they feel a bit rushed. You do, however include some nice dialouge between Harry and Ron, which both slows down the pace very well and draws the reader in more. (Well, at least it drew me in more...)
Nice work, and Merry\Happy Almost-Christmas!
| KlainePotter 11/8/08 . chapter 1
that was very good!
| David Fishwick 11/8/08 . chapter 1
Cute idea and thanks for writing.
| emily 11/7/08 . chapter 1
That happened a bit fast. Try adding a little plot to the middle between "I love you", them kissing, and Ron showing up
| magically speaking 11/7/08 . chapter 1
this was cute