Personally, I think this the quality of the writing is about a notch or two higher than the other Marina/Setsuna fics I've seen floating around. Most of the other fics get Marina's POV right. Well, who wouldn't? She's easy to read. The problem is Setsuna's reactions. I think you've got them down pat in this one, especially the part about him remembering his mother when Marina touches his face. ^_^

Yay. You wrote it.

I'm a little sad that it's only a one shot. I would've been interested to see this storyline/idea go through the rest of Gundam 00 - Setsuna and Marina hiding the fact they are lovers. I'd love to see the scene when they actually became lovers, lemon or no. This story seems like before and after said event.

Hm... Kara no Kyokai... I might go check that out.

So, that is a secret... Hmm... That would explain things...

How did he survive?! Of course the Gundam has something to do with it... What else?!

You made good use of the series material over here, especially the infamous scene when Mileina ask the both of them if they’re lovers. I wonder, if SUNRISE took the romance path afterwards; how will be their relationship? Maybe a little awkward.

Oh Code Geass, good luck with that.

Aww that was cute! ^^ Then again, Marina and Setsuna are always cute! BTW thanks so much for letting me know about my *ahem* error in the title (god you do not know how embarrassed I was when I noticed that >__