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SusanMarieS
2009-08-31 . chapter 6
i liked this story. i admit it was a bit ... choppy ... but it totally worked. and i loved the story idea. thanks for the effort.
Frogster
2009-06-30 . chapter 2
That was funny! I do think it would be better as a script, but until FF starts allowing plays, I guess we'll have to go with this.

I would absolutely love to see Casey start dusting Derek's face.
HRInuyashaFan16
2009-06-30 . chapter 6
loved this story. it was really cute. although i think that you should either write an epilogue where it is either a few months or a few years after this and how their family reacts to them dating or where they are getting married. or write a sequel but because you were saying that you should stick to one-shots although while this was a little rushed at the end it was a pretty good story.
DisforDasey
2009-06-30 . chapter 6
YYAY! Well, that was a super awesome story! Aww, I'm kind of sad that it's over... I really liked it. But congrats on finishing it!!
Aw, Derek and Casey are just so cute! There was a whote lot of cuteness in this chapter, especially... Thanks :D
Anyways, I love love LOVED this story! Thanks for writing it! :D
mimibear
2009-06-30 . chapter 6
nice DASEY...short but so cute...i love it..
kbw121691
2009-06-29 . chapter 6
I really loved this story. Can't wait to read more of your stories.
slytherensangel26
2009-06-28 . chapter 5
well, its been a while since you updated last!

this is a nice chapter. great work! update soon!
MermaidMidna
2009-06-27 . chapter 5
YAY YAY YAY UPDATE! This made me a very, very happy panda. :D And I loved the Daseyness going on. If only this could be the movie goshdarnit.
kbw121691
2009-06-27 . chapter 5
Please update soon.
meganhope666
2009-06-27 . chapter 5
this story is awesome!
WWEAngel
2009-06-27 . chapter 5
awe cute plz update soon
HoT.aGaiNsT.a.WaLL
2009-06-26 . chapter 5
Took you long enough! It's been like, forEVER since you updated. Now I'm all excited to see what happens next. :D
~TaRa
DisforDasey
2009-06-26 . chapter 5
YYAY you updated!
I'm veryveryvery happy now!!
Aww, that was an awesome chapter!
And yay! They kissed!!
Aw, they're too cute :D

THANKS A BUNCH!!
slytherensangel26
2009-03-29 . chapter 4
meh. its not too bad. could use some beta ing, still its good.
WWEAngel
2009-02-28 . chapter 4
oh geroge n marti r lost tear but when is the dasy gonna come other then the sleeping arragnements?? love it plz update soon!
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