Love the story, it was so sweet. And the song is 'Breath' by Breaking Benjamin, right?

. Well, it seems that you're the only person I know so far who can make first-person writing sound good. Kami knows that I can't do it, not at all. Kudos too you, you made Gaara sound ever so deep with just a hint of the monster he used to be. It isn't exactly how he is in the recent anime/manga, now, but I enjoyed it.

it was really good one of my friends told me about it and I'm glad she did.

It was quite good. I really enjoyed reading it. You put amazing detail to the little things into it. Gaara stayed in character amazingly for a romance type story. Which is quite difficult. I should know I have tried. You did quite well expressing everything. The way he felt, her insecurities, everything.

The song is breath by breaking benjamin am i right? when i read the name of the story and the summery i automatically thought of that song. i also thought of the same song while reading it and caught some of the lines in the story though one was altered a bit. good story by the way

I liked it! Kankuro's such a dummy!

You know...it may of been cliche but...iloveclicheendings.

I love it and i want you to know..i have always wanted a guy to say that to mee. but you know no such luck.-SuicidalUchiha likey-THUMBS UP-

This story is great.

Though you did make it obvious that the song is Breath by Breaking Benjamin by putting the line,"Poor salt into the open wound.
Tehe. Although, if you hadn't put that in there, I probably would have only guessed that the song was by Breaking Benjamin.

Keep up the good work!

I like how possessive he is XD it's cute and how Sasuke damaged her mind, it's too true/

Possessive much. Anyways, good one shot.

OMG I LOVE IT

man this was a good story
you really have good ideas

good job for the story

ohh, wow!

this as great. I went through a few pages of fanfiction, not likeing how any of them sounded. but this one was great, I'm glad!

the only song I know called breath is by breaking benjamin, but I don't know if it was that or not.

kudos.

I couldn't distingish moodswings reading it but I completely understand. That's why I hate writing when I can't do it all at once. But this story is really cute.

Really like this pairing...)

awh i loved it!

lol kankuro XD

classic.

tehee.

it was ahmayzingg.

Huggles-chan