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kamikaze2007
2009-10-12 . chapter 13
I want to thank all the readers and reviwers. This story took almost a full year to write, and I'm going to miss working on it. Also, did you notice? This had 13 chapters, and the last chapter was published on a Friday! Haha, anyway, thanks again for reading and reviewing. This story helped me grow as a writer and I love that you guys encouraged me to keep it going. THANKS GUYS!
TheNaggingCube
2009-08-06 . chapter 11
You are evil and you've left us hanging for over a month now. Come back and finish please!
B
2009-04-12 . chapter 9
aww, i really like this :D

can't wait until u update again :)

i decided to search for primeval fics after last nights episode. Cutter can't be gone! aw, so sad :(
kate.wants.to.become.an.actor
2009-03-07 . chapter 9
nice stori update soon n gud luck wif ya skool stuff i no how u feel right now bloody exams
Chezzers
2009-02-09 . chapter 8
freaking loved it you go for it hunni!
regards
chelsey
x x x
ShadowRebirth37
2008-12-30 . chapter 8
Eek!! I hate the future predator!! Im glad he killed it!! Ugly bat thing... anyway, good job! I hope Conner gets better soon!! Good job!! Cant wait for the next one! Please update soon!! ;D

~Ibeyla ^^
kate.wants.to.become.an.actor
2008-12-24 . chapter 8
hi plz update soon good luck n happy xmas
ShadowRebirth37
2008-12-14 . chapter 7
EEP! What is it?! WHAT IS IT?!! I wanna know!! XD I'm so happy you updated!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please update soon!! XD

~Ibeyla ^^

(Btw, I just uploaded chapter 2 of "Prey"!! Please R & R!! ;D)
kate.wants.to.become.an.actor
2008-12-14 . chapter 7
mint loved it and ill check out ya other fic too
ShadowRebirth37
2008-12-04 . chapter 6
*shudders*

That creeped me out... big time... which is weird considering my Zoids fic have this level of violence... maybe its because Organoids dont eat? ^^; Me no know. Lol.

This was a great chapter anyway! Sorry I was late reviewing, I was caught up with my Zoids fic, "To Save a Raven". -_-;

Anyway, good job!! ;D
kate.wants.to.become.an.actor
2008-11-27 . chapter 5
aw mint your american the only american i know is a teacher at my schhol from rhode island or summit lyk that.happy thanksgiving
ShadowRebirth37
2008-11-25 . chapter 5
Yay!! This was a good chapter! Shame the Rexes had to die, but oh well. XP

You did good on this chapter!! Your length is getting better, too! Im really liking how this fic is taking shape! :P

Btw, Im going to post my own Primeval fic, titled "Prey". Its a scene rewrite that takes place in the 1st episode, when the Gorgonopsid trashes the school. Could u Read & Review it when I get up in a few days? ;D

Anyway, good job on this chapter!! I cant wait for the next one!! XD
ShadowRebirth37
2008-11-12 . chapter 3
Yay!! A dinosaur!! What is it, some sort of raptor? A baby Albertosaurus? A Rex chick? It was so cool though!! ^-^

This was really well written!! I really liked it!! I did spot one little error I wanted to let you know about. In the last few sentences, when the man says "Nothing to bad", that 'to' should be a 'too'. Nothing major or anything, I just wanted to let you know. ^^;

I really like how things are shaping up!! I love the way you've written this; the style is very cool. I wish you would make the chapters a little longer, but hey, I've been accused of short chapters too. XD

Anyway, great chapter!! I'm so happy you updated!! I hope you update again soon!! ;D

~Ibeyla ^^
ShadowRebirth37
2008-11-08 . chapter 2
Wow!! This is really good!!

Man... I cant blame Cutter, seeing your friend and comrade eaten by all those creatures would definitely give me PTSD!! ^^;

I really like how you are writing everything. Im a stickler for details and descriptions, and you didnt disappoint!! I also saw no grammer errors!! Im very impressed!! Good job!! ^-^

I really really like this!! I hope you update soon!! I really want to know what kind of creature theyre going up against! I hope its a dino! XP But, good job!! ^^
kate.wants.to.become.an.actor
2008-11-08 . chapter 2
hi like your writing wen will the next chapter be up.
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