I love stories that come from the heart and from personal experiences. It brings so much into the story.

You did a wonderful job on this!

CC

Lovely!

Thank you so much for this, the most emotion-evoking story I've had the pleasure of reading in a long time. Beautiful! I actually teared up on several occasions! And I love that you didn't make Alice and Edward bad guys. Awesome job! And THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Well I must say that I am certainly happy that I found and have read this story. I absolutly LOVED it! It made me cry at parts, laugh, awe and cringe at others, but I completly enjoyed it no matter the emotions I was feeling. I am incredibly sorry for your loss. It is easy to see, now that the fact is known, just how much of yourself you put into this story. It was written with passion and in a way that any grammar nazi can be happy about You are an AMAZING author and I look forward to looking up other stories that you have graced this lovely site with Definetly one of the more emotional yet amazingly written stories I have read :D

Salut
Je voulais juste te faire savoirs que j' ai beaucoup aimée ta fiction
Elle est très originale des autres et ces très bien comme ça .
Au début cependant je n' était pas sur , car je trouvais étrange la mort de Alice et Edward et je trouvais que justement la raison de leur mort était peut -être un peu moins crédible .!

Cependant, tous le reste je l' ai complètement adorée au nivaux de leur relation et tout j' ai aiderai ! Ta fiction à été originale à cause de ça dans toutes les autres Bella et jasper sont des âmes sœurs alors que la tienne ils s' aiment mais il n' ou liront pas pour autant Alice et Edward. Également , ces dernier ne deviendront pas cruel ou sans cœur comme dans d' autre fiction
Donc voilà j' ai bien aimée cette histoire et merci de ne la faire partager)

Lovely. Thank you for writing.

Well, I learned a lesson...read the whole paragraph BEFORE commenting! Sorry about that.

This was such a beautiful story, and you captured many of the feelings associated with losing a close loved one. Your writing is beautiful and articulate. I enjoyed the story immensely, and can't wait to read the sequel.

Also, thank you for sharing your personal story of loss. My youngest daughter died several years ago, and I appreciate you putting your emotions into words. I have felt much the same way, but lack the ability to express my grief often, or well. The path to healing is different for everyone, but hopefully the result is acceptance and peace.

They stole a car in San Antonio, but now, in Chapter 13, they suddenly have Carlisle's Mercedes? How did that happen?

I've just re-read your beautiful story. It was even more amazing to me, this second time around. I thank you for sharing this with us, as I'm sure just the writing down of it had to have dredged up so many of your own memories. Again, I am so very sorry for your loss and proud that you chose to live again. Thank you.

This was very good! I love how you slowly built up Bella and Jasper's relationship and their banter back and forth was really fun to read! I can't wait to read the sequel! :D

I don't normally like Bella and Jasper stories but this one was great ! in cant wait to read the sequel xx)

Yay! *Stands up and cheers
Great story. Sucked me in I barely stopped to eat and sleep! I'm so far behind in everything else I need to do ... but it was a fantastic story!

hey this was a good story sad at the beginning and then the travel to save Jasper that had to take a lot out of Bella to leave her house of comfort for her and to try to carry on with her life so know she is keeping her promise to Edward to live her life and i am glad about that i am also glad that Jasper and Bella ended up being friends and traveling and helping each other to you once again and for sharing your story very good like i said so have a good week.

Awsome story, thank you so much for sharing it!

Thank you for a great story!