This is a really great story I wish you would update more though. You didn't give the characters different personalities either you managed to keep the personalities that they have in the game! This story overall is completely and totally awesome!

Nice. I like where you are going with this. The last part of the first chapter was a little confusing though. Keep writing!

This story is great - very original idea. I like it.

Partner Neku up with Minamimoto for Reaper training - you could have Neku pick up some of Minamimoto's zetta cool phrases, or as a bit of humor have Neku suck badly in math.

Please update quickly!

I like it. This is a neat twist on the game. Hope you continue with this story.