amazing story, I really love it. What is going to happen next? Please update!

NO! even though sort of guessed this would happen, since it is a becoming jane fanfic...

*SQUEE!* i'm fangirling so bad right now! this makes me very happy.

once again, great description. i loved the passage in this. but my favorite part would have to be the description of him reading! you're really good at giving the reader a picture and a feeling of what's going on. o, i can't wait to read the next chapter!

*gasp* my heart stopped a little when it was revealed he was attacked! i was scared for a second, lol.

:) i love it! favorite chapter so far. i hate it when you don't really want to talk to someone, but they make you feel so comfortable that you can't help but blabber on and on.

aw. this makes me sad :(

Oh dear. What is going to happen? I'm eagerly looking forward to the continuation.

Oh, what a great chapter! even if I knew that his father would object, I got really angry! Now you have to fix this!

God I hate that Arabella! poor Lucas! Great chapter! :)

Aww, I love William!

I love it! :D very good use of the language of the time, excellent names... I shall continue.

Oh dear me. arabella is such bitch. I do not like her one bit. Oh well, hopefully love conquers all... :)

A good story, well written. Hugs, Sarah x

i really like it! i'm excited for more.