 illegal goddess 2009-03-06 . chapter 1It was so cute ^_^ And I liked the way you gave Patti a wise side. She isn't that simple, I think, as she is often portrayed. |
 Ana H. Fenald 2008-12-28 . chapter 1I like how this was in Patti's POV.
most people maker her out to be stupid, yet you used that child like innocence to maker her some what wiser.
All in all, I really liked it! |
 ravyncat 2008-11-14 . chapter 1I really like the idea of all of them together...it just seems right.
It was nice to see a Patti POV that sounded like her, but at the same time didn't sound too stupid--if that makes sense. The serious way she can act during battle makes me think there is more to her than what we usually see in everyday life.
I loved the way you wrote this. I could almost see this little scene showing up in the anime if they were a bit older...haha. |
 Anzer'ke 2008-11-14 . chapter 1She's right you know, sooner or later it's gonna happen. |
 The Lamest Fad 2008-11-13 . chapter 1That was really really cute! I totally enjoyed it.
I think your portrayal of all three of them was very accurate, especially Patti.
Good job! :D |
 Evanescences Angel 2008-11-10 . chapter 1Awesome! I loved it! Ah, I'm more of a Kid/liz fan but still tis was great! XD I loved how you apture how both are not afraid of each other! To stupid trying to be adults... I worship this! -W- Fav! |
 Misguided Angel of Death 2008-11-09 . chapter 1That was really, really well-written! I loved reading the in-depth, thoughtful, mature Patti. It's a real treat. ^^ And him kissing Liz instead of kissing her feet was just...pink fluffy clouds of awesome floating in the air, for lack of legit description. XD
Ah, the triangle! *heart* Kudos for keeping the symmetry alive~! =D
Can't wait to read your next prompt~ ^^
~ ryu no yuki from Lj ~ |
 animekraze 2008-11-09 . chapter 1cykstar from 42_souls here~
That...was awesome.
You did it from Patty's perspective perfectly and I like the bit where Patty analyses Liz and Kid's personality. And also how we usually view her as the childish one, and here she seems to be the most mature. 8D very very nice (and sneaky) of you~ |
 Reizod 2008-11-08 . chapter 1Quite enjoyable I must say.
Your portrayal of Patti is very apt. The simple insight she has in this story feels very much in line with her overall character.
The interplay between all three of the characters is very well done and the ending felt right for the parties involved.
Again quite enjoyable |
 FlareKnight 2008-11-08 . chapter 1Lot of good fun in this one. Also managed to put in how they all met from Patty's point of view. Its always a pretty interesting thing to give some respect to how sharp she can be. A good trio that's for sure. |
 Verboten Byacolate 2008-11-08 . chapter 1This is so great. It's well-written and witty and I absolutely love it. I'm also very fond of your audacity to write a triangle-- it gets a bit tiring sometimes when people decide that it has to be one way or another. Triangles are fun. Thank you a bunch for writing this, and for promoting the community~ ^-^
~Bya |
 miyavixoxdiru 2008-11-08 . chapter 1i LOVED it! although I like liz/kid better than patty/kid. but it was awesome. you should write another one:) |
 Aiiro Hoshi 2008-11-08 . chapter 1Loved this.
It really brought out the fact that Patty is most likely not as childish and inattentive as she seems, and the idea of a "threesome" (LOL) among these guys is an entertaining concept.
I really do encourage you to write more for this trio. Because we don't have enough.
- Aiiro Hoshi |
 AtomicWinter 2008-11-08 . chapter 1This was SO beautiful and perfect! I REALLY like it! It is so difficult (impossible) to find a K/L/P fic! x( I hope that you will make more chapters/fics of this OT3! Thank you! |
 Humming LadyBug 2008-11-08 . chapter 1I loved this! Seriously.
It was totally sweet. But I do kinda question about the threesome bit. Kissing the both of them?? That's like...O.o
Didn't see that coming. Haha, the things Kid would do for symmetry.. But it was interesting, definitely. And so well written.
Nice work ^^ |